作文赏析课the woman I admire most.ppt

The woman I admire mostComposition Everyone all have a admire most woman. I admire most the woman is my mother. 每个人都有一个最崇拜的女性。我最崇拜的女性是我妈妈。 Everyone all has a woman he admires most. The woman I admire most is my mother. 用上定语从句，让句子不再复杂。 My mother is the most admire woman. She is a kindness woman. admire是动词，要用形容词形式admirable。kindness是名词，不可以用来形容名词，要用形容词kind 善良的。 kind admirable So I do everything more and more better. So I do everything better and better. better已经是比较级，要想表达越来越好，就用better and better。 I love she very much. I love her very much. 做宾语，要用人称代词的宾格。 She can give up her business and successful just for I can study more harder than before. success so that it was so hard to looked after me that she had to give her job. look up She was taught me sing songs. to She taught me to sing songs. She taught me how to sing songs. I must thanks to my mother because she gives me new life. thanks to不能做动词用，要用say thanks to Thanks to the English language, we can learn a lot from other countries． my mother let me understand what is love. my mother let me understand what love is. 宾语从句的语序必须是陈述语序，尤其要注意whether, if和wh–疑问句引导的宾语从句的语序，即按照主语，谓语的顺序。 作文写作技巧 (1)注意篇章结构，合理布局 　　开始部分(opening paragraph)——说出文中的要点、核心问题。 　　正文部分(Body paragraphs)——围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。 　　结尾部分(concluding paragraphs)——对全文的总结和概括。 　　要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系，内容完整、连贯。前后呼应，去除与主题无关的内容. (2)确定主题句 　　主题句是对全文的概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常主题句出现在一篇文章的开头，而后，全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解释，扩展。 　　写主题句应注意以下几点： 　　①归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点 　　②提炼出一句具有概括性的话 　　③主题句应具有可读性，抓住、吸引读者。 一：开头 　　句子的开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首，或用分词做状语等。 　　〔原文〕We met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning. 　　〔修正〕Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together. 　　〔原文〕The young man couldnt help crying when he heard the bad news. 　　〔修正〕Hearing the bad news, the young man couldnt help crying. 二：经过 　　2.在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等。 　　①强调句 　　〔原文〕I met him in the street yesterday. 　　〔修正〕It was in the street that I met him yesterd