写作10正反论证.ppt

However, the majority of the students disapprove of this approach, believing that it is rude and even illegal. In addition, children may become more rebellious and it is more important for them to have a happy childhood. From my perspective, Wolf Dad approach is too extreme and is not suitable for every family. [精华点评] 在正反论证的议论文中, 在表达观点的时候, 很多考生只是会用they think, agree, disagree等简单低级的词汇。考生要注意语言的丰富性。在而本范文则使用了多个不同的词组：think highly of, firmly believe that, disapprove of和believing that。 另外考生不要把基础写作看成简单的翻译, 如“解决中国父母过分溺爱孩子的问题”倘若简单翻译为solve the problem of Chinese parents’ spoiling their children, 语法上虽然没有错, 但是并不地道,因此可以根据信息点的语意和内在逻辑对句子改造为“孩子受到过分的宠爱, 而‘狼爸’方法可以解决这个问题：Too many Chinese children are ruined with excessive love and care so Wolf Dad approach is a good solution to this big problem. 如今, 选美比赛在青少年中越来越普及, 因此你们班就此开展了一场“Should beauty contests be held among teenagers?”的讨论, 请你根据下面表格内容写一份总结。 一些同学认为 另一部分同学认为 1. 爱美之心是人之常情 2. 提供了展示美和欣赏美的平台 3. 提高青少年审美品味, 如在重要场所应该如何穿衣 1. 着重外貌，盲目追求外表美 2. 商业化，参与比赛浪费时间和金钱 总结：外貌并非成功的关键，应注重内在美…… [参考范文] Recently our class has had a heated discussion about whether beauty contests should be held among teenagers. Some students hold the opinion that love of beauty is part of human nature, so beauty contests not only provide a stage for people to show off their beauty but also a good chance to appreciate beauty. Beauty contests, in their opinion, can help improve teenagers’ tastes like helping them choose the right clothes for important occasions. However, other students disagree because they are afraid that most beauty contests focus on contestants’ appearance, which encourages teenagers to run blindly after appearances. Moreover, many beauty contests are too commercialized and it is a waste of time and money to take part. Although our classmates’ opinions vary, we can still safely draw the conclusion that a good face is not the key to success and we should focus more on inner beauty. [精华点评] 首先, 本文的语言比较丰富和地道, 如“人之常情”可以翻译为human nature,