写作中分词的运用.ppt

Writing Strategies (III) Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 下图是国外小学新生的课堂一角, 对照你当时的上课情况,做出比较并谈谈你的感受。你的作文必须包括: 1. 描述图片里学生上课的场景 2. 比较你同时期的上课情况 3. 简要谈谈你的感受 From the picture, we can see that the American pupils are taking an active part in their class. They all wear a big smile and they are raising their hands up high. They are trying to answer the teacher’s questions. From the picture, we can see that the American pupils, all wearing a big smile, are taking an active part in their class. Raising their hands up high, they are trying to answer the teacher’s questions. This picture reminds me of my first day in primary school. We were told to behave ourselves. We had to put our hands on our laps or behind our back and zip our mouth during most time of the day. I felt extremely nervous. So I buried my head deep down. What a sharp contrast between the two scenes! … Told to behave ourselves, we had to put our hands on our laps or behind our back and zip our mouth during most time of the day. Feeling extremely nervous, I buried my head deep down … _______________________ (条件), mine seemed rather dull. ___________________________________ (时间), I gradually lose the ability to learn on my own. ____________________________________________ (原因), we students don’t bother to think, argue or question. Compared with their class Always expected to come up with “correct answers” Having spent about 12 years in school From the picture, we can see that the American pupils, all wearing a big smile, are taking an active part in their class. Raising their hands up high, they are trying to answer the teacher’s questions. This picture reminds me of my first day in primary school. Told to behave ourselves, we had to put our hands on our laps or behind our back and zip our mouth during most time of the day. Feeling extremely nervous, I buried my head de