写作中的连贯表达,结合具体短语连词及文章,适合备考.ppt

Rewrite: Today is Labor Day. It is a festival. I went to the East Lake Park with my friends. I saw lanterns and streamers. Many people were there. We had a picnic. We cleared away the rubbish. Today is Labor Day. In honor of the day, I went to the East Lake Park with friends, where I saw lanterns and streamers. Many people were also there. In the park, we cleared away the rubbish. After that, we had a picnic under a tree. And we had a good time today. Rewrite: 2. In the morning, I got up. I walked to school. I saw smoke rising from a building. It must be on fire. I dialed 119. Fire engines arrived. The firemen put out the fire. ? I got up early in the morning. After breakfast, I was about to walk to school when suddenly I saw plenty of dark smoke rising from a building nearby. I knew it must be on fire. So I went to the nearest telephone booth and dialed 119 immediately. Three minutes later, some fire engines arrived and the fire was put out finally. Rewrite: I will tell you the change of my life. Before, we had many classes every day. I had to do a lot of homework after school. I went to bed at 11:30 in the evening. I had no time to play. I was very tired. Now I can visit museums. I can learn computer and drawing. In the evening, I can read books and newspapers and watch TV. I go to bed at 10:00 now. I’m very pleased to tell you the changes in my life since our homework has been reduced. Before that, learning during the day was very simple. Having class and doing homework was the only thing we should do. In the evening, we also had a lot of homework to do. We could not go to bed until 11:30. Nevertheless, since reducing the learning load, my life has become much more interesting. I also have time to watch TV and read newspapers. I no longer stay up late; on the contrary, I go to bed at about 10pm. In short, I am quite satisfied with my life now. 作文中的连贯表达Make Coherence 北京海淀区教师进修学校 何国贵 一、过渡性词语 1.在同一话题上补充内容: 另外，还有whats more, besides, moreover, fur