医学英语第四讲.ppt

引子 一篇好的科研论文要具备两个要素 1. 陈述的科学性、准确性和逻辑性  Scientific, accurate and logic statement 不科学: Chronic viral hepatitis C is a problem of immense proportions. The only therapy that currently exists is interferon (IFN). Correction: Chronic viral hepatitis C remains to be a medical challenge, and there is no radical cure for the condition at present. 不准确 Prostate cancer is the most common malignancy in western countries. Correction: Prostate cancer is the most common malignancy in men. 不合逻辑 A 81-years-old woman, known to have multiple myeloma （骨髓瘤）, was admitted as a result of fever, abdominal pain and hyperamylasaemia (高淀粉酶血症） and hyperamylasuria. Correction: An 81-year-old woman, who was suspected to have multiple myeloma, was admitted because of fever, abdominal pain, hyperamylasaemia and hyperamylasuria. 2. 词的正确使用 Correct use of words 下文至少有5处用词错误或不当： 245 cases with CSM were reported. All cases were treated with anterior cervical decompression and auto ‘iliac bone（髂骨） graft fusion. 31 cases were re-operated 4 months to 2 years after operation. Follow-up was undergone within 5-15 years after operation. 解决方法Solutions 观察 Observing 模仿 Imitating 思考 Thinking  第四讲目的：purpose, objective, aim，goal 包括 1）研究背景（background） 2）研究目的 （purpose) 3）研究内容: 研究设计（study design）、地点（setting）和研究范围（scope） 1. 单表目的 To examine the association between cigarette smoking and the incidence and progression of diabetic retinopathy. 看一看吸烟与糖尿病性视网膜病发病率及发展究竟有没有关系 语言点：examine cf. investigate / association cf. relation / incidence cf. morbidity / progression cf. development 2. 背景+目的（注意背景与目的之间的内在关系） Previous studies have shown that limited joint mobility (LJM) is associated with microvascular complications in diabetic patients. This study was performed to see whether LJM predicts the development of other diabetic complications and which factors predispose to the development of LJM. 先有研究表明，糖尿病病人中关节活动受限与微血管并发症有关。本研究的目的是要了解这种关节活