四级新题型作文.ppt

引言型作文 Writing Writing Direction: For this part, youre allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, “Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. I ’ve done it hundreds of time.” Youd write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 审题 从命题要求中可以看到此次命题的考试内容为励志型话题，本次四级作文探讨的话题是成功与毅力之间的关系，与学生的日常学习生活和人生观有关。命题属于依据材料来分析问题的文章体裁，写好这篇作文，需要抓住两点，一是紧跟题目要求，即对上述幽默性的话语做出评论，二是在评论的基础上要亮出自己的观点。 审题 对于这样的话题，我们可以借用永恒的三段式这一模式，中心应该围绕“where there is a will, there is a way” ： 首段依据背景材料来提出问题，通过“戒烟很简单，但是不坚持，也是不能成功的”得出“做任何事情都需要坚强的意志，需要坚持到底” ，从而确定整篇文章的中心论点。 　 第二段主要应聚焦于论证“意志坚定的人才能够成功”，可以正反论证，也可举例论证，以此为主体段落。 第三段论证“学生也是这样，不刻苦学习，终究不会成为有用之才”，此段可以将文章的中心议题和大学生的生活贴近，联系学生自己的日常生活，从而更具现实性和普遍性，学生也可以从中得出“学习并非坦途，需要坚持不懈的努力”。 As we have read from above, quitting-smoking seems easy, but in reality it is rarely achieved. Therefore Nothing succeeds without a strong will. Life is like a Marathon. Many people can’t get to the terminal. This is not because they lack vitality(活力，精神) but because their will of success is not strong enough. 　 　In fact, strong will is a kind of good quality which successful people should own. A great man is always one who has a firm resolution and an inflexible (不可动摇的, 坚定不移的) spirit. One will never succeed all his life without a firm will to get the final victory. As a rule(通常; 一般说来), great tasks are accomplished by men of strong will. For example, Dr. Sun Yatsen, the founder of the Republic of China, set the Chinese people free from the Manchurian(满洲) rule through a long period of hard struggle. Many of his attempts failed and many of his followers were killed, but he had an inflexible spirit and stuck to his cause. Finally, he made the revolution of 1911 a success. The same is true of men in all walks of life。 　　It is quite obvious that there is nothing difficult in the world, if you make up your mind to do it, you will certainly accomplish your