如何写英语作文中的主题句 2.ppt

一、将句子重组，从而精简其内容和形式 2. 句子间密切关联——副词短语 It is now illegal for individual business firms to conspire to set prices. In the same way, the labor of different companies should not be allowed to work together to set wages. Just as individual business firms cannot conspire to set prices, labor of different companies should not be allowed to work together to set wages. 一、将句子重组，从而精简其内容和形式 3. 利用插入语或同位结构 Traditionally, society has treated alcoholics as outcasts. Now more people realize that alcoholism is a disease. This disease is often made worse by social patterns. Traditionally, society has treated alcoholics as outcasts, but today more people realize that they are victims of a disease, one often made worse by social patterns. 二、恰当使用标点符号 The great interest in professional football has inspired several football novels among them are North Dallas Forty and Semi-Tough. The great interest in professional football has inspired several football novels. Among them are North Dallas Forty and Semi-Tough. The great interest in professional football has inspired several football novels, among which are North Dallas Forty and Semi-Tough. 三、动词的选择 尽量使用行为动词取代非行为动词以增强句子活力 Actionless verb: to be (is, are, were, have/has been, had been) It was clear that the soprano was no longer in control of the high notes that had been a source of worry to her for years. Clearly, the soprano had lost control of the high notes that had been worrying her for years. There is a real need for free, tax-supported doctors and hospitals in the United States. Currently there is a movement toward such a program. It is called HMO or Health Maintenance Organizations. Many Americans badly need free, tax-supported doctors and hospitals. The new HMO or Health Maintenance Organization program would fill this need. 四、去除句子中的无用累赘 There are many farmers in the area who are planning to attend the meeting which is scheduled for next Friday. Many farmers in the area plan to attend the meeting scheduled for next Friday. A child