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如何写出中考英语高分作文 来源：英语坊 2011-01-26 15:07:43 [标签：作文 中考]小学精华资讯 免费订阅 　　英语写作是学生学习的一个盲点，缺乏对写作的专门训练和反思，老师的工作量大，造成作文讲评大多数时候只谈现象，因此学生学得也不具体、不深入，忽略写作技能的提高，甚至误认为只要句子结构正确，无单词拼写错误就应该得满分。同学们应该走出对英语写作认识上的误区。那么怎样才能写出一篇优秀作文，而在中考中获取高分呢? 　　一、写作决窍 　　总体把握，要点齐全;人称时态，逻辑清楚; 　　关键词汇，动词第一;组词成句，结构完整; 　　组句成文，连词增色;此路不通，绕道迂回; 　　字迹工整，留好印象;从句适量，高分有望。 　　二、写作步骤 　　1.认真审题。审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息，告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。 　　2.确定文体和时态。确定文体后，根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料;同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。 　　3.写完要点，但不随意发挥。 　　4.先草稿，后抄写。 　　三、习作点评 　　[2004年全国中学生英语能力竞赛初赛初三组] (14分) 　　Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers. 　　·What exactly your hobby is; 　　·When and how you became interested in this hobby; 　　·Why you enjoy your hobby; 　　·About your hopes and plans for the future. 　　写作要求： 　　1.根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。 　　2.条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。 　　3.词数60-80. 　　[学生习作A] 　　My hobby is read books①.When I was seven years old.I became interested in reading books.I like needing books because there are a lot of useful things in books.I can learn a lot of knowledge from books. Books also② can teach me how to be a good person.Books even can solve many problems for me.I will read more good books to improve myself. 　　①改为reading books，动词作表语时应该用动名词。 　　②also的位置应放在can之后。 　　[点评]：档次9-11分。 　　①要点不全，漏掉最后一个要点。 　　②句子基本无误，能正确传递信息给读者但文章不流畅，句子与句子之间过渡不自然，给读者感觉在回答上述问题。 　　③有少量错误。 　　[学生习作B] 　　My hobby is reading.Reading books is very enjoyable.When I was young ,my mother used to tell me a story before.I went to bed every night.The stories were so interesting that I always felt they weren’t enough.So I began to read books by myself.Little by little I became interested in reading.I can learn much knowledge and many interesting things all over the world.When I read books,I can enjoy the beautiful sentences.At the same time I can improve my writing.I want to be a writer in the future,so I must study hard and read more books so that my dream can come true. 　　①开门见山、点题。 　　②真情流露，理由充分。 　　③文中带圈的连词使用得恰当，使文章过渡自然、