必威体育精装版高考英语写作专题辅导课件-基础写作[人物介绍].ppt

[精华点评] 这篇人物介绍的写作涉及课外单词, 如“广州市三好学生”、“多才多艺”。既然题目已经给出这些单词的提示，学生必须按照题目提供的生词进行写作, 切勿随意编造或改写单词。其次，本文也涉及了较多固定用语，如“学校学生会主席”(chairman of the Students’ Union of our school)、“英语演讲比赛”(School English Speech Contest)、“校园才艺大赛”(the talent show of our school或School Talent Show)等, 学生要大写专有名词的首字母,并要在日常学习中积累与此相关用语, 如团委(the Student League)、校园歌手大赛(School Singing Contest)等等。 本题五个句子全是介绍李华的信息, 为避免累赘, 写作时要避免通篇使用Li Hua或she。首句必须使用Li Hua作主语, 具体指出描述对象, 但在接下来的句子中, 可穿插使用she、Li Hua作为句子的主语。特别需要注意的是,学生必须细心审题, 李华是女孩, 该细节提示可在写作内容第一点“呼吁大家向她学习”找到。 [参考范文] Charles Dickens, a famous novelist of England, was born in February, 1812 and passed away in June, 1870. When he was young, his family lived in poverty and therefore he was forced to work in the factory. Later, he developed an interest in writing and came up with many novels which showed the poor situation of the inferior group. Deeply affected by his childhood experiences, his writings reflected the darkness and unfairness of the society of his time. Many of his works are still popular in the world. [精华点评] 人物介绍, 多使用一般现在时描述人物特征、贡献、影响等, 若描述具体的过去行为, 则使用一般过去时, 如本题中狄更斯“生平简介”的描写便应该使用一般过去时。名人传记介绍，往往涉及出生日期和逝世日期, 学生应该遵循英语日期从小单位到大单位的表达, 并熟记月份的拼写以及月份首字母要大写这些细节。此外, 介绍名人生平事迹, 要注意使用规范用语, 避免使用口语化表达。英文中, 词组比单词更为正规, 如pass away, live in poverty与die, be poor相比, 显得更为正规。 * 林辉 * * * 1.be born in a poor family出生贫穷家庭 2. attend school 上学 3.at the age of 在……岁时 4.during his childhood在他童年时 5.sense of humour幽默感 相关短语 6. be always ready to总是乐于 7. modest and honest谦虚诚实 8. be regarded as被认为是 9. have a gift for在……方面有天赋 10. work hard at致力于 11. devote one’s life to致力于 12. graduate from 从……毕业 13. take an active part in积极参加 14. open-minded and optimistic乐观开朗 15. be admitted to被……录取; 考入 16. go abroad for further studies出国深造 17. be honored for因……而受到尊敬 18. dream of being a writer梦想成为作家 19.make contributions to对……做出贡献 20.have a strong interest in对……有浓厚兴趣 1. When he was a boy, he showed a great interest in maths.他小时候就对数学非常感兴趣。 2. Born in a small town in 1812, Charles Dicken