潍坊模拟高三英语作文讲评.ppt

高三英语作文讲评课 暴露问题 审题不准导致详略不当和时态误用。 句式单调,存在中式英语现象。 缺乏必要的过渡，行文不流畅。 词性、词义掌握不准，导致表达不清楚。 4 1 2 3 解决问题——写前 审题 定确 话题 明确 要点 合理 布局 其它 体裁、人称 主体时态 层次清晰 （分段） 详略得当 （扣题） 仔细阅读 汉语提示 信息3 信息4 开头 (歉意） 正文 （请求） 结尾 （意愿） 体裁 人称 时态 章法 一般现在时（一般过去时） Para.1 Para.2 Para.3 信息1 信息2 信息5 ①我很抱歉没有参加英语考试。因为我周末滑冰把胳膊摔折了。 ②稍作展开（前因，后果） ③补考时间 总结…… 书信格式 课外作业（如阅读书目， 作业要求） 第一人称 解决问题——写中 语言表达 准确性 地道性 连贯性 多样性 病句分析 1. I’m writing to express my aoplogize 2. Due to my careless , my arm was broken when I was skating. 3. I‘m sorry for my absent from the English exam. 4. I’m sorry that I didn’t attend to the English exam 5. Can you tell me when can I take the exam again? 6. Please tell me the homework is, such as the books I should read and what I should do for the homework. apology ness absence 准确表达 地道表达 道歉句型： 1. Please forgive me for my not attending the English test. 2. I’m sorry for my absence from the English test. 3. I sincerely apologize for my absence from the English exam 请求句型： 1.I am wondering when you could give me another chance to have a test? 2. Would you please \like to tell me what our homework is? 3. I would appreciate it if you could give me another chance. 4. I sincerely hope that you could forgive me. 5. I would be grateful if you could help me out. 连贯表达 1. 选出表达更连贯的表达 I’m sorry that I didn’t attend the English test 填入合适衔接词。 …I failed to take the test. ________it is very important for me. Would you please give me another chance for a make-up one and tell me the specific time for it. ________ , I’ll do whatever I can to finish the homework. ______ I wonder if you could attach the requirements to the letter if it is convenient to you. 2. 考虑一下结尾哪种更好？ A. Don’t worry about me, I’ll recover soon. Looking forward to your early reply. B. Finally，I apologize to you again. Looking… C. I’m sorry to have to put you so much trouble. Looking… What’s more, In addition, Besides However 多样表达 一句多译 我周末滑冰胳膊