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大学英语四级写作 第一讲 句子的构成 I. 简单句的拓展 II. 从句的展开 （一）名词性从句 1：我们现在需要做的是尽快解决此问题。 2：我相信年轻人很有必要努力学习。 3：在团队比赛中，实战是提升我们合作意识的最佳方法。 4：其他人持有不同的观点：网购也会带来一些问题。 （二）形容词性从句 例1：我们应该建立一个年迈的父母得到很好照顾的社会。 例2：随着上网时间的增加，人们面对面的交流却在急剧减少，这就可能导致情感疏远和隔阂。 III. 句子的美化 （一） 强调句 例1：手机、网络和计算机确实给我们带来了便利。 例2：正是父母的保护没能使孩子积累足够的经验面对社会的激烈竞争。 （二） 倒装句 例1：我们绝对不能忽视知识的价值。 例2：通过做好小事，青年人能积累做大事的经验和培养解决问题的能力。 例3：尽管图画很简单，但其传递的内容很深刻。 （三） 双重否定 例1：当今社会，手机是最常见、最流行的通讯方式。 例2：教育帮助人们获得知识、技能和新的视野。 （四） 非谓语：ving/ved 状语 例：与汽车相比，自行车在若干方面具有优越性。 IV. 范文赏析 This is a simple but thought-provoking cartoon: the youngster/ guy expresses his worries about “disposing of thenuclear waste”;to his surprise,his father responds/answers:“If you can empty the dustbin here,you can do anything.” Obviously,this picture can be naturally associated with the importance of doing small things:if youngsters 1 intend to achieve success, it is advisable for them to begin with little things. In contemporary society, it has become a trend for ahost of teenagersto ignoretiny things in life:cleaning rooms,washing clothes and emptying dustbin.Meanwhile, an increasing number ofyoung people find it rather useless or unnecessary to dealwith these these things.A case in point is the boy in the picture. However, it is these small tasks that enable youngsters to buildup adequateknowledge, ability and experience.As amatter of fact, intelligent people in largenumbershave come to realize the significant of doing small things. Taking a look around, we can notice a great many young people likethe boy in the picture.Doing small thingsbringsus skills, arousesour enthusiasm/passion for success, andhelpsustomakeprogress. As a college student, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for youngstersto enhance ourselvesby doing small things. Thus, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends, classmates and acquaintan