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自我介绍一下： 李润生 @李威廉IELTS 南京大学与 美国霍普金斯大学硕士 教授雅思X年 网络小说写手 《公路局长》 《Watch 90后》 最精准和科学的提分方案 从4.5到5.5，从5.5到6.5，从6.5 到7.5 11月写作如何过6.5 小作文： 柱图，饼图，流程图 大作文： 教育类，科技类，社会生活类，政府政策类 18句话搞定写作6.5 5.5 与6.5分作文的5点根本区别 1，小作文的对比思路 2，描述数据的句型多样性问题 3，议论文的观点表达的批判性句型 4，主体段内容的细化思维（话题词伙） 5，“具有细化思维和批判性性思维的有逻辑推进是得七分的关键” 18句话搞定写作6.5 18句话搞定写作6.5  “ 李润生十大必背段落结构” 1，教育类 2，科技类 3，社会生活类 4，政府政策类 雅思议论文的四大题型 1，讨论题（discuss the both views) 优先四段式结构 2，辩论题 (to what extent to you agree or disagree) （五段式—先抑后扬（可写2段自己支持观点） 3，报告型(what are the causes and effects) （可四段也可五段） 4，组合型( do you agree or disagree? How can you explain it ?)（五段式） “ 李润生十大必背段落结构” 四大类结构： 1，让步式 2，罗列式 3，直接式 4，批判式 十类语法错误—”5分之殇” 第一组 语法错误： 1, Influenced by violence and porns,it is necessary to find that teenagers are likely to go astray. 2,Styding at school, especially in the kindergarten and primary school, it will be ,of course, more chances for children to study and work with others. 戳到你内心的“痛” 第二组： It is advertising makes us buy something on a whim. There is a research shows that the?wealthier?countries the more artworks they needed. ? There is a river cross the Beijing. 多么痛的“领悟” 第三组： 1，Many smokers are unwilling to cease smoking despite they have knowledge of ill health effects. 2, Public disorder can lead to damage a country’s economy. 3,Traditional buildings are desired sometimes ,for the simple reason is that they are of commercial and cultural values. 戳到你内心的“痛” 第四类： 1，There are plenty of natural resources in china ,most of that are unused. 2，I cry, you cry. 3, We all tried our best, however, we lost the game. 4, Education has been made available to more people ,however , many adults have some problems with literacy and numeracy. 7.5分的思维： Nowadays, there are lots of advertisements on television or on the billboards. Some people think that the advertising boosts the sales of goods and it encourages people to buy things unnecessarily. This arguments may be true. In my country, many adver