ETS范文示例托福高分技巧.pdf

智 课 网 托 福 备 考 资 料 ETS范文示例托福高分技巧 很多托友在考综合写作时，总是苦恼自己的听力不给力，导致自己 的综合写作部分总是徘徊在limited。不可否认，综合写作要得到4分或 5分这样的高分，听力的重要性不言而喻。但是，要得到3分原始分数， 也就是对应我们量化后的分数20分，听力真的有那么重要吗？我们来看 一下ETS在《官方指南》中给出的一篇3分的综合写作范文和范文评语， 再下定论。 Score 3 Response： The lecturer provide the opposite opinion concerning what the article offered. The team work often bring negative effet. As we all know superficially, team work and team spirits are quite popular in today’s business world and also the fashionable terms. However, the lecturer find deeper and hiding results. Firstly, the working results of team mrs can’t be fully valued. For example, if a team mr does nothing in the process of team discussion, decision making and final pratice, his or her work delinquency will not be recognized because we only emphasize team work. Also, the real excellent and creative mr’s work might be oblitetrated for the same reason. Secondly, the team work might lose its value when team mrs are leading by several influential people in the group. One of the essential merits of team is to avoid the individule wrong. But one or two influential or persuasive people will make the team useless. Thirdly, team work oftem become the excuse of taking responsibility. All in charge, nobody care. All in all, what we should is the fully distinguish the advantages and disadvantages of a concept or widely used method. That is to keep the common sense. Rater Comments: The first point is clearly stated and accurately conveys the lecturer’s comments about team mrs who contributes little and team mrs who contribute a great deal. (第一点：有分论点有细节，但有些许语法和拼写错误) The second point about influencers is somewhat error-prone or vague and non-idiomatic language , not fully explain the reason these influencers create problems.(第二大点：与听力有一点关系，但是表述模糊且没有细节) The third point is not fully related to the passage and lecture, and the meaning is not clearly.(第三大点：完全与听