正反两方 业余时间.ppt

结构 连接词，过渡句 要点之间缺乏必要的过渡和连接，所以文章连贯性可读性不强 时态：一般现在时 因特网 the Internet 时间是我们自己的 belong to , be our own we can arrange our own time to do whatever we like so we can go one line often convenient的用法 It is convenient for us to communicate with others on the Internet. The internet enable us to get latest knowledge and information both at home and abroad 丰富我们的业余生活(此处可适当拓展） enrich // our spare time becomes ….due to/thanks to a little 不能修饰可数名词 It’s ok to get on line but we should set a time limit . They think most of the students playing games and chatting instead of looking up….(错） 逃学 play truant, escape school, cut class, be absent from 【议论文——观点对比型作文写作模板推荐】 Topic ①Recently we’ve had a discussion about _______.②Our opinions are divided on this topic. ③Most of the students are in favour of it .④Here are the reasons. First, _______. Second, _______. Finally… ⑤However, the others are strongly against it.⑥Their reasons are as follows. In the first place, _________. What’s more, ___________. In addition/Besides, _________. ⑦Personally speaking, /As far as I am concerned ______________________. Only in this way, 展望前景 标题 ①导入话题 ②观点有分歧 ③正方观点 ④列举2—3个赞成的理由 ⑤反方观点 ⑥列举2—3个反对的理由 ⑦个人观点 Many students think we can go on line as much as possible in our spare time because we are free then. Through the Internet, we can gain plenty of the newest knowledge and the latest information at home and abroad. What’s more, network offers us a convenient way to communicate with each other. The Internet makes our lives outside class colorful and various. On the other hand, a few students partly agree to this idea. Going on line is part of our daily life. But they suggest a time limit. They’ve found that more students are playing computer games or chatting instead of studying their lessons or looking up materials. There are a few students who are often absent from school in order to go on line for fun. On one hand, some students consider it truly beneficial. The p