观点论述类.ppt

2012年浙江高考第二节：书面表达（满分30分） 你校正在进行“英语读书周”活动，该活动要求学生摘录名言佳句（quote）并相互交流。以下是某同学摘录的句子：”Your future depends on many things but mostly on you”：请按下列要求用英语写一篇100-120个词的短文： 1.针对摘录句中的观点谈谈你的看法； 2.举例说明理由 注意：短文的开头已给出（不计词数） In the English Reading Week, one of my classmates recommended a quote to us, which goes like this: Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you. 【考点】观点类议论文—开放式 在写作时注意把握好以下几点：(1)书写规范，卷面整洁。(2)行文紧凑，过渡自然。(3)要点完整，表达清楚。(4)语法正确，时态准确。(5)用词无误，控制得当(80-120词之间)。(6)认真复查，胸有成竹。 写作思路 1.What is your opinion on this motto? 2.explain the motto ： many things？ 3. give an example to illustrate your idea. 4. Draw a conclusion. 特别提醒： 1. 举例子时要有针对性，语言要简洁有力 2.多积累些这方面的名人例子 I cant agree more with this view. Its true that our future is determined by many things, such as opportunities and help from others, but our own attitude, determination, and hard work play a more important role. In other words, we are the master of our own future. Take Abraham Lincoln, for example. He was born in a poor family, and only received a limited education in his childhood. Yet through his painstaking efforts, he changed not only his own fate but also the history of America. Even to this day, Lincoln is regarded as one of the most inspiring figures in the world. Therefore, I firmly believe that our future is in our own hands. I cant agree more with this view. Its true that our future is determined by many things, such as opportunities and help from others, but our own attitude, determination, and hard work play a more important role. In other words, we are the master of our own future. Take Abraham Lincoln, for example. He was born in a poor family, and only received a limited education in his childhood. Yet through his painstaking efforts, he changed not only his own fate but also the history of America. Even to this day, Lincoln is regarded as one of the most inspiring figures in the world. Therefore, I firmly believe that our future is in our own hands. 写作模板句式 I can