2011高考英语写作高分优化策略 519课件.ppt

2011高考英语写作高分优化策略 江苏省镇江第一中学 周 林;2011高考英语写作高分优化策略主要内容 ;高分策略八、“一句话”技巧高分策略九、万能模板五、实考作文评析;一、遣词三原则 ;(三)搭配合理 ;二、造句四原则 (一)完整性 1. 能够表达一个完整的意思 2. 至少包括主语和谓语两个部分(祈使句除外) 例1 不完整: While they always try to avoid the number of 4 for its connection with death in Chinese pronunciation. 完整句: However, they always try to avoid the number of 4 for its connection with death in Chinese pronunciation. ; ; 修改后 : Different people have different preferences for books. Different people read the different kinds of books, because different people have different intentions and notions just as they choose the different things to meet their needs in every facet in life. ;(三)连贯性: 句子的连贯性指的是句子中各成分之间的关系明白清楚、富有条。例1 原句：Not so many years ago in this city, one of the rivers was so polluted that there is no living fish in it.优化句：Not so many years ago in this city, one of the rivers was so polluted that there was no fish living in it.例2原句：We know that violent crime is increasing, and you also know many incidents go unreported.优化句：We know that violent crime is increasing, and we also know many incidents go unreported. ;(四)多样性 句子的多样性指的是表达同一种意义时，可以使用 各种变化的方式和句型。 例1. The goats grazed peacefully in the farm and were unaware of the approaching hunter. (并列句) →Grazing peacefully, the goats in the farm were unaware of the approaching hunter. (分词短语+复杂句) 例2. People throughout the country have greatly demanded all kinds of nutritious food. (用people开头) →There is a great demand across the country for all kinds of nutritious food. (换成there be句型) ;三、组段三原则 (一)段落的统一性 However, fake commodities are extremely harmful to consumers as well as to the whole society. First of all, fake commodities may cause losses to consumers. Meanwhile, fake commodities may harm peoples health, sometimes even lives. And in the 1998 fatal alcohol poisoning case in Shanxi Province, for example, a peasant produced alcohol, dreaming of becoming rich overnight, which, with 27 people killed and