TEM4(写作讲座)课件.ppt

TEM 4;Composition Marking criteria Sample Writing Analysis 历年试题 Exercise Note-writing Marking criteria Types of notes 历年试题 Exercise;Composition Marking Criteria;TEM 4 Writing;1.如题目中给出主题句，起始句，结束句，均不得计入所写字数　 2.只写一段者：0~4分；只写两段者：0~9分（指规定三段的作文） 长度计分标准: 201～170词: 扣1分???? 130～150词: 扣2分???? 110～130词: 扣3分???? 90～110词: 扣4分???? 90词以下: 至多给5分 3.为了便于阅卷人员掌握评分标准，现将各档作文分相当于百分制的得分，列表如下，称为得分率。其中9分的得分率为60（相当于百分制的60分）。　 作文分 15　14 13　12　11　10　9　 8　 7　 6　 5　 4　 3　 2　1　　 得分率100　94　87　80　74　67　60　54　47　40　34　27　20　14　7　 ;;英语专业四级考试委员会要求阅卷人员评分时综合考虑以下四个问题: 1. 作文是否体现主题思想; 即是要求作文文章切题,全文统一,无不相关细节内容. 2. 组织结构是否合理; 主要体现在全文条理清楚,组织连贯和谐,善于使用衔接语以增强文章的逻辑性. 3. 语言文字是否有重大错误; 4. 卷面布局是否整洁.;文章的写作顺序;历年试题;历年试题;历年试题;历年试题;历年试题;历年试题;历年试题;历年试题;Analysis of sample writings;Analysis of sample writings;Passage 3: One Way to Solve the Problem With the increase of vehicles, such as cars, trucks, etc., it’s now generally accepted that vehicles are a major source of air pollution. Vehicles mainly use gasoline as the energy. Many poisonous chemical substances are sent into the air. How to solve this problem is a great concern of society. We can use solar energy as the main energy source instead of gasoline. Using solar energy has mainly two advantages. One is that the solar energy is an economical energy. Petrol is expensive. People have to pay more money for it. Otherwise the car can’t move. But the solar energy is different. If only the sun rises, you can drive your car freely. Everywhere welcomes you. The only thing you must do is that you must pay a little money for the machine in order to accept the sunshine. Compared with the gasoline, it’s cheaper. Second, it’s the most important aspect. It can avoid air pollution and protect our air. The solar energy can’t produce poisonous waste. It’s neat and clean. You don’t worry about your health. Many dangerous diseases, such as cancer, can be reduced. The fresh air is around you. The temperature can keep a normal level. It can’t be either hotter or colder. A