六个英文散文的总结.doc

写作 高分特征: ?内容相关（切题即可）?结构清晰（新闻联播三段式）?语言精彩（句子结构词多变） 主要步骤：现象描述 危害分析 原因分析 建议措施 观点阐述 意义 案例一：（自行车） 第一段提炼： 第一句模板提炼： 1，In china , bicycles have gained great popularity among Chinese people. 2, in the recent decade,........ 3, in the contemporary society,...... 第二局模板提炼： 1, In china ,no means of transport is more popular and important than bicycles. 2, Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles. 3, Based on a recent report, a majority of Chinese families in the cities acknowledge that they have two or three bicycles.(调查式描述) 第三局模板提炼： During the rush hour, it can be noticed/seen that thousands of people...... 第二段提炼：(利弊分析) 1，to begin/start with,...... What’s more / moreover ...... Finally/lastly/eventually/ultimately 2，on one hand ...... On other hand / for one thing ...... For another 原因分析段： 原因分析段 = 原因分析主题句 + 具体原因（2到3句） + 原因总结 主题句1：generally speaking , several reasons(/factors/causes) can account for/be accounted for / be responsible for the phenomenon. 2，in general , there are several purposes responsible for _______________,but the following may be the most critical(中性话题) 3，it is evident / obvious / apparent that the causes of ______ are diverse. 4，to solve ( / resolve / tackle / settle / deal with) this worrying / disturbing issue, it is of vital to determine / explore / investigate the possible reasons. 原因/危害/建议/意义分析逻辑： 原因1:(原因+原因描述：即现象) In the first place , _______ is the root cause . An illustration of this point would be that ________(或调查法：based on a survey , ......) 2， in the second place , ________constitute another major reason . Specially , _____________(原因+具体描述) 3，in addition , (social prejudice / ignorance ) plays a critical role in the issue . 负面：社会忽视/偏见 正面：重视emphasized 4，（法规） besides, the ______ policy being carried out in _____(does’t) enables ______ to _____ 原因总结1， consequently , ______ has not been emphasized. 2，as a result , _____ pay relatively less attention to______ . 危害分析： =主题句+危害1.2+总结句 主题句1，such ___ be bound to / generate / resu