2014年六月英语六级写作练习.doc

2014年6月英语六级写作练习：如何缓解大学生压力 　　1)当今的大学生要面临很多来自不同方面的压力 　　2)大学生缓解压力的方式有… 　　3)你一般都是如何排解压力的? 　　How Should College Students Relieve Pressure? 　　行文思路 　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一个问题，提纲第2点要求说明如何解决该问题，提纲第3点要求阐述“我”的做法，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。 　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出当今的大学生主要面临哪些压力;列举大学生缓解压力的方式;谈谈“我”是采取哪种方式排解压力的。 　　高分范文 　　How Should College Students Relieve Pressure? 　　Today’s college students face many pressures, mainly from parents?expectation, study, economy, employment and all kinds of competition. [1]Although pressure to some extent can provide motivation, overdue pressure has a serious negative effect. Pressure can destroy a student’s confidence. [2]More seriously, it might make some students lose control of their emotions and behaviors. 　　[3]Considering the great damage of overdue pressure, college students should learn to how to relieve pressure. [2]First, we should have a right evaluation of ourselves [4]so as to [5]make use of advantages and avoid disadvantages. [2]Second, we should [6]set a clear aim of a struggle. The aim can give us motivation, and make us become active. [2]Third, [7]attending collective activities is an effective way to relieve pressure. [2]Finally, if you find pressure is nearly [8]beyond your control, you’d better turn to professional psychological guidance. 　　[2]As to me, my pressure is mainly from future employment. [4]In order to reduce it, I asked my parents help me analyse my advantages and disadvantages, and produce a more practical job objection. [2]So my employment pressure was relieved greatly. Now I become confident in my future, and I [9]do believe I can get an ideal job after my graduation. 　　【亮点点评】 　　[1]although引导让步状语从句。 　　[2]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。 　　[3]“考虑到，鉴于”，介词。 　　[4]表示目的。 　　[5]“扬长避短”。 　　[6]“设立一个明确的奋斗目标”。 　　[7]动名词短语作主语，用不同于前两点的句式提出缓解压力的第三种方式。 　　[8]“超出…范围或能力”。 　　[9]强调动词believe。 　　佳句临摹 　　1.佳句：Although pressure to some extent can provide motivation, overdue pressure has a serious negative effect. 　　临摹：尽管兼职工作能够带来很多好处，但我们不应该在它上面花费太多的时间。 　　2.佳句：Attendi