南京英语中考复习——写作文指导分析.ppt

* * * * * * 本资料来自于资源最齐全的２１世纪教育网 * 本资料来自于资源最齐全的２１世纪教育网 本资料来自于资源最齐全的２１世纪教育网 本资料来自于资源最齐全的２１世纪教育网 * 本资料来自于资源最齐全的２１世纪教育网 * 本资料来自于资源最齐全的２１世纪教育网 本资料来自于资源最齐全的２１世纪教育网 * 本资料来自于资源最齐全的２１世纪教育网 * * * * * * * We can make an outline like this. It helps us to arrange the paragraphs well. Then we need to list some key words or phrases. * * * * * 列关键词 Suggestions plan time carefully, join interest groups , achieve a balance between study and bobbies, take part in different after-school activities, do some sports , do some housework … 列关键词 Conclusion Let’s…, I hope… 并列句 复合句 结果状语从句 Some students spend too much time on their hobbies. They can’t finish their homework on time. Some students spend too much time on their hobbies and they can’t finish their homework on time Some students spend so much time on their hobbies that they can’t finish their homework on time How to make better sentences? 变换句式 连词成句 连句成文 There are many things we can do. we can plan our time carefully and try our best to achieve a balance between our study and hobbies. can set up and join different kinds of interest groups, take part in some good social activities. we can do some sports. If we have time, we should help parents do some housework. However, how can we make better use of our spare time? For example Besides these, And also we We 添加连词或句子！ suggestions How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. 方法一：善用连词连接句子，使文章更流畅。 1、表转折的连词: but , although ,however… 2、表因果的连词: because, so…, so that, as a result 3、表顺序的连词: at first , to begin with , then , later , at last… 三类连词: Let’s try 1._____________ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight. 2.H