tem4写作技巧（TEM4 writing skills）.doc

tem4写作技巧（TEM4 writing skills） Special four test taking skills (composition 1: consistency of sentences) Consistency of sentences: refers to the integrity of the sentence structure, tense, voice, tone and sentence consistency, weightlifting part of the expression of an independent, complete thinking. The relations between the components of a sentence should be coordinated, coherent, and natural. Here are a few sentences that are not unified: 1) the sentence meaning is incomplete * The, lecture, was, given, in, such, an, interersting, way. The lecture was given in such * an inereresting way that everyone enjoyed it very much. 2) the subordinate relation of sentences is fuzzy * We, are, going, to, visit, John, and, he, is, our, English, friend. We are going to visit John * who is our English friend. 3) incorrect use of connectives * The, main, reason, he, was, absent, was, because,, he, was, ill. The main reason he was absent * was that he was ill. 4) subject predicate inconsistency * Every, teacher, and, student, were, invited, to, go,, to, the, party. Every teacher and student was invited * to go to the party. 5) the center does not understand * I, was, watching, a, last, night, I, suddenly, found, Mary,, sitting, in, front, film, of, me. When I was watching a film * last night, I suddenly found Mary sitting in front of me Practice： There are inconsistencies in the following sentences. Please revise and point out what kind of situation you are in. (2) The old man always goes for a walk that park and it s near in to his apartment. ()) Each, of, the, houses, are, painted,, different, colours. ()) The, real, reason, I, was, sleepy, was, because, I, got,, up, early, this, morning. ()) He, walked, along, the, street, he, suddenly, realized, he,, was, lost. ()) The, party, was, so, dull., Reference answer ()) The, old, man, always, goes, a, walk, in, that, park, for, which, is,, near, to, apartment., his, etc. The sentences subordinate relation is fuzzy Some friends add a