八年级上册书面表达训练（下）.doc

八年级上册书面表达训练 作文指导加范例点评与练习( 下) Unit 6　Im going to study computer science. 写作指南 本单元的写作是介绍自己或他人的理想中的工作。在写这样的文章时，首先要写出自己或他人的理想是什么，即希望成为什么人，为什么希望成为那样的人；其次写出应该怎样朝着理想去努力奋斗，即怎样做来实现理想；最后点题。因为是理想中的工作，所以常用be going to 表示的将来时态来描述。 假如你是韩明(15岁)，请根据下面的提示词，以My future job为题写一篇短文，60词左右。 提示词：like，play sports，write articles，school magazine，sports reporter，grow up，newspaper，work for，CCTV My future job Im Han Ming. I am fifteen years old. I like playing sports and writing articles. I play football and basketball every day. And I often write articles for our school magazine. I want to be a sports reporter when I grow up. I am going to write articles for newspapers. And I want to work for CCTV as a sports reporter. Now I work very hard. I think my dream will come true. 点评：本文是谈论将来打算的一篇文章。作者根据所给提示，运用be going to 结构，表明了自己为实现愿望所要做出的努力，使文章活泼生动，主题鲜明。 a computer programmer study hard to learn computer science Sarah a cook learn from her uncle who is good at cooking Mike a writer keep on writing articles Linda a pianist use free time to take piano lessons and practice playing it 参考范文： Everyone has different dreams. Frank is going to be a computer programmer. He is going to study computer science hard. Sarah is going to be a good cook. Her uncle is good at cooking and she is going to learn it from him. Mike is going to keep on writing articles and send them to magazines and newspapers. Linda is going to going to be a pianist. She is going to take piano lessons in her free time and spend more time practicing playing the piano. Unit 7　Will people have robots? 本单元的写作要求是对未来生活的变化进行描述。写此类文章需要注意以下事项： 1．要在“变化”上下工夫，什么样的变化、变化的程度等；且时态多为一般将来时。如果与以前作比较，还可用过去时；如果与现在作比较，可用现在时。 2．注意基本功的训练，力求语法正确、用词得当、语言地道。单词拼写、标点符号以及书写也是不容忽视的。 刘英是一个12岁的女孩，她经常梦想她未来的生活。看下面的表格，写一篇80词左右的短文。 Now Future Job student dancer Hair short，straight long，curly Place to live Guangzhou Beijing Transportation subway her own car Sports tennis golf Pets tortoise dalmatian(斑点狗) Liu Ying is a twelve-year old girl. She is a student with