二轮书面表达.ppt

Learn how to write Wannian Middle School Zhang Yanhua 中考英语书面表达评分标准 评分标准:考生能根据题目要求，采用适当的时态、语态、句式结构，语言完整，准确表达所示内容，分五档评分。 1.（17～20分)内容完整、表达充分、层次结构清晰、 语言流畅、地道，有少量错误。 2.（13～16分)内容完整，表达较充分、层次结构较 清晰、语言较流畅、地道，有少量错误。 3.（9～12分)内容较完整，但表达不够充分，层次结构较 不太合理、语言不够流畅、地道，有较多语言错误。 4.（5～8分)内容不完整，语言表达错误较多，不能完整表 达意思。 5.（0～4分)内容不完整，语言表达错误很多，仅有几个单 词可读，不能表达出与提示内容相关的意思。 第一步 审题 确定基本要素:5W1H Jim is ill, so we went to see him last week. He was very glad. He said he stayed there alone for two days. He was nervous about the test at the end of this month because he missed lots of lessons. And the bad weather affected his feelings, too.We asked him to take it easy because we could take turns to help him with his lessons. And we would bring him some CDs, so that he could listen to music. He was very pleased. I hope he can get well soon. 第二步 抓要点 第四步 连句成文 时间 空间 细节 连贯 呼应 第五步 查错改错 试着找找文章中的错误吧 Last Sunday Li Lei and Mei Mei went to play in the garden. They find that a young tree in the corner was dying.We thought they must save the young three. First ,they put a rope around the tree and set up a sign near it,saying “Taking Care of Trees”.Then they watered it.Some days late, the tree came back to live again.Their teacher praised them, “You are good child!” They felt happy and pride. It’s our duty to take care of trees.In this way, we can have a better environment.Let’s learn from them and make the word more beautiful. 中考英语书面表达评分标准 .评分标准: 考生能根据题目要求，采用适当的时态、语态、句式结构，语言完整，准确表达所示内容，分五档评分。 1.（17～20分)内容完整、表达充分、层次结构清晰、 语言流畅、地道，基本无错误。 2.（13～16分)内容完整，表达较充分、层次结构较 清晰、语言较流畅、地道，有少量错误。 3.（9～12分)内容较完整，但表达不够