英语写作指导supportingevidence.pptVIP

Thesis Statements What are the common mistakes? Writing announcements Too broad of a statement Too narrow of a statement Developing too many ideas What Did We Do Last Week? Practice! With a partner find the mistake with the sentences A, TN, TB, 2, OK This essay will discuss the people you meet in exercise class I made several mistakes in the process of trying to win the respect and affection of my teenage stepson(继子) There are now more single-parent households in our country than ever before Organization is key to being a successful parent I had squash, tomatoes, and corn in my garden last summer This paper is about sharing housework In many ways, sports are an important part of American life Widespread gambling has changed professional football for the worse Advertising has bad effects on all of society My roommate has his own unique systems for studying, writing term papers, and cleaning out room My roommate and I are compatible in most ways, but we still have conflicts at times My life has moved in new directions since the rewarding job I had working with older people last summer A TN OK TN A OK TB OK TB OK 2 2 Practice! This essay will discuss the people you meet in exercise class There are now more single-parent households in our country than ever before I had squash, tomatoes, and corn in my garden last summer This paper is about sharing housework In many ways, sports are an important part of American life Advertising has bad effects on all of society My roommate and I are compatible in most ways, but we still have conflicts at times My life has moved in new directions since the rewarding job I had working with older people last summer Rewrite each of the sentences that contained errors as appropriate thesis statements The Second Step of Essay Writing The first step of essay writing is to begin with a point (the thesis). The second step is to Support the Thesis with Specific Evidence Practice For the three following outlines add the third local su