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纠错:拼写/语法/搭配/用词/逻辑 1.give you / have some advices 2.join in/ take part in us 3.take part in /join enchrichment classes 4.We are pleasure to have your suggestions 5.We will offer you neccessary help and advice if you plan to have an amateur work. 6.if you would like to gain/ acquire a part-time job. 7.If you ever think of joining the student union, call us imediatly. 8.contact with us right away 8.Welcome you to join us. 9.If you want to find a part-time job, we will happy to help. 10.We will answer you back one by one. 11.But she couldnt refuse her mother. 12.I think students attend enrichment classes on summer vocation is benefitial. 13.To my opinion, parents should allow your children to decide whether to attend enrichment classes or. 14.I feel exhausted for lacking time for sleep in last summer holiday. 15. If you force your child to , they wont have interest of study. 16.Li Hua , a senior-one student, had to .... 17.It is no benefit to students attend such classes. 18.Senior students atten enrichment classes during the summer vacation has its advantages. 19.Because after attending such classes, they will have large progresses in study in next term. 20.I suggest parents that please ask for your childrens opinion. 21.I think students attend enrichment classes is a good way. 22.Give your children more time, maybe they will learn better than ever before. 23.whether it makes a difference? 24.If you can’t focus your mind on these classes, if…,if…., please not attend the enrichment classes. 一、基础写作评分标准 2.5.8 2---衔接 5---内容要点 8---语法 基础写作的目的是考查考生最基本的语言表达能力,如用词的准确性,句子结构的复杂度,语法运用的正确性,信息内容的完整性和句子之间的连贯性. 基础写作题的题材会基本贴近现实生活和学生的实际情况,并趋向社会热点问题. 基础写作的内容属于控制性情景作文.其控制性包括:一是必须用5个句子来写,但词数不限. 二是必须描述全部内容. 三不要增添不必要的多余信息。 1.三行半 2.要点 3.文章结构 4.分段 5.总-分-总 6.自圆其说 7.要点 8.有话可说 9.写满不超 10.页面和书写 概括大意– 记叙文 Who– Li hua What – enrichment classes and homework Result– unhappy 三个要点—3 分 语言运用---2分 发表观点 三段论 第一段：明确表明观点和态度---支持？反对？ 第二段：证明观点 （论据举例 ） 第三段：给家长建议（结论） 字数：写满格子，但不超格 不能标：1、（概括大意） 2、 基础