高考英语作文秘诀.doc

How to make a better oral composition By Quickwar Huang 先来看这样一篇作文： The Olympic Games will be held in Beijing China on August 8th, 2008. In order to spread the Olympic spirit and promote the the theme of Green Olympics, Hi-Tech Olympics and Peoples Olympics, people are having various activities to welcome the Olympics. For example, they begin to learn English. And they try not to produce so much waste. And also they are developing the transportation, building sports buidings and hotels, and trying to make our country more beautiful. Oh, yeah, nowadays it has a lot of vonlunteers in Beijing. As for me, I’m a high school student, so the first thing I have to do is to study English well. Secondly, I want to do more exercises to get stronger. In a word, I want to make my own contributions to the Olympics. 分析： 1，内容不够充分——口头作文不是简单的提纲翻译，在表达完outline里面的意思后，注意扩充。扩充方法：可以使用复合句补充进一层的意思，可以使用短语代替单词进行替换。* 比如上文第一句，完全可以再加上一个非限定性定语从句，告诉大家这个奥运的到来是多么怎样怎样的一个时刻或事件，请练习扩充——  1.The Olympic Games will be held in Beijing China on August 8th, 2008，which is the most historical event for all Chinese. 当然也可以把原来句型改变一下，以变得丰满一些： 2. As we know (As is known ot all,) The 2008 Olympic Games, which falls on August 8th in Beijing China, will soon pull on the attraction from all over ther world. 练习：The Olympics spirits are higher, swifter, and stronger.(请练习扩充) 1.__________________________________________________________2.__________________________________________________________ 3.__________________________________________________________ Shooting is one of the items in Olympic Games 1.__________________________________________________________2.__________________________________________________________ 3.__________________________________________________________ * 又比如文中第二段，人们开展的各项活动，不能如此简单地一扫而过，不然时间肯定会多出很多，所以要学会给其中一些点进行扩充。（这里说其中一些点是考虑到要详略得当）请练习扩充——they begin to learn English.——they begin to learn English with the purpose of making communications with foreign friends more convenient.请继续将如下的几点进行扩