英语句子写作 English Sentence Writing.ppt

大家可以抄笔记，但是只记一些重点，不用逐字逐句的写。 * 为什么我要讲句子的基本成分呢？因为在批改学生习作的过程中，我发现有很大一部分同学，虽然词语已经用得十分恰当，甚至是什分的华丽，但是竟然会出现很多句子成分用错或者缺失的情况。 * 主谓宾是句子的主干，主语就相当于人的脑袋。但你会发现有的人脑袋很大，有的很小。句子也是一样。下面我们看三个例子。 * 但不代表是动词就都是谓语。 * RISE VI.不及物 The sun rises. ?raise 使升起 Please raise my salary！ * 我们知道主语，谓语（和宾语）是句子的必要成分。那么定语是什么呢，就是你身上衣服和头上的花朵或者帽子。 2）有个旅游的广告说，半平米游遍新马泰，一平米游遍全欧洲，一个厨房游遍全世界，等你游遍全世界了，你的价值观说不定就变了。 * 我们可能都知道副词可以作状语，实际上介词短语。。。也可以作状语。 第2个例句，这个介词短语（必须承认）就表示了让步，意味着在写作中对所论述的观点表示折中。 * 这里讲的是宾语补足语。 * * 讲义练习 * 改后的句子也体现了短句的魅力—清晰有力。 * 讲义练习 * 4.倒装句 为了突出强调 Not only should the parents spend more time with their children, they should also try to communicate with their children more often. Under no circumstances should teachers hit their students. 5.强调句 “It is…that” “It is…who” 正是…导致了… It is my advisor’s help that made me progress further. It is him who teaches me how to love and be loved. Unit 3 如何使句子变得简洁 1.句子合并 定语从句 City authorities will have more incomes. And these incomes can be used to subsidize public transportation. ?City authorities will have more incomes, which can be used to subsidize public transportation. One of the staples of New Year’s Eve dinner is Jiaozi, Chinese dumplings. They are extremely time-consuming to make. ?One of the staples of New Year’s Eve dinner is Jiaozi, Chinese dumplings, which are extremely time-consuming to make. Michael Yu is the chief executive director of the New Oriental School. He suffered a lot in his life. ?Michael Yu, who is the chief executive director of the NOS, suffered a lot in his life. 同位语 2.做状语的分词_表示原因或结果 因为学习音乐和艺术帮助学生集中注意力，所以它可以改善他们的学业. Because the study of music and art helps students concentrate, it can improve their academic performances. ?Helping students concentrate, the study of music and art can improve their academic performances. ?The study of music and art helps students concentrate, improving their academic performances. ? 因为很多在线游戏基于历史和科学背景，所以它们是好的教育工具。 Because many online games are based on historical and scienti