2012年9月雅思大作文A类5.5分大作文范文-教育题目.docx

1.作文题目Some people think that the government should make university education free for all students ,regardless of their financial situation .To what extent do you agree or disagree.2.学生原文Higher education today is the key to an individualsdevelopment and a countrys long-term success. However, it is serious that a large number of students find it difficult to afford increasing tuition fees for institutes like universities.In the debate of whether government should pay off all university education fees , I personally believe they should offer financial help to economically disadvantaged students.Those? who claim that all costs should be funded by government point to the fact that making higher education available to all its citizens regardless of their financial situation and the principle of education equality.This indeed reduces students financial burdens to a certain extent.The main reason I think why government should only offer financial help to poor students is that the budget of the government is not unlimited, especially when considering the fact that in some remote areas people do not even have access to primary education and suffer from malnutrition. Moreover,it seems somewhat unpair to those tax payers who are not planning to study in an university.Govenment covers all the costs for higher education that would definitely increase tax-burden on those tax payers.Therefore, I think a good way to tackle this issue is only offer financial help students in poverty,as it ensures economic status will not be an obstacle for students to apply for university studies,and at the same time the government does not have to shoulder a financial burden beyond its capacity.老师批改文中标识：用词不当逻辑错误语法错误修改添加Higher education today is(改为has long been regarded as) the key to an individuals（改为individual’s）development and a countrys long-term（去掉）successin the long run（这样更加地道）. However, it is serious that a large number of students find it difficult to afford increasing tuition fees for insti