汉英翻译引言部分课堂举例.docVIP

汉英翻译引言部分课堂举例 错误译例一 拍摄地点：绍兴市景点：景区指示 建议改译：RESIDENCE OF ZHOU ENLAI’S FORFATHER 错误译例二 拍摄地点:宁波市环城北路 建议改译：PLEASE GET IN LANE KEEP IN LANE (不准换道) 错误译例三 拍摄地点：杭州黄龙体育中心附近 错误词句：线内停车 即停即下 即下即走 Parking within the line only No parking in driveway Stopping only if requested 建议改译：Parking within the line only No Lingering here (within the line) 错误译例四 拍摄地点：杭州物美大卖场文二店 原 文：裸卖熟食、酱菜，请由我们的员工为你装袋、称重、计价，确保卫生。 误 译：To buy cooked food and preserved pickes, please ask our store employe to packthemin the bag for sanitary concern and reweigh it for price。 建议改译：To ensure the food safety , please ask our employees to pack, weigh and charge those unpacked cooked food and preserved vegetables for you. 错误译例五 拍摄地点：杭州城站火车站 原 文：除公交车外 误 译：EXCEPTBUSES 问 题：直译，死译 建议改译： BUS ONLY 错误译例六 拍摄地点：灵隐寺 原 文：飞来峰 误 译：Peak Flying From 建议改译：Peak Flying From Afar 错误译例七 拍摄地点：杭州某展览馆 建议改译： 1. Please go on a guided tour in sequence 2. Please don’t make loud noise during your visit. 3. Please don’t touch the showpiece.(No Touching) 4. Please don’t smoke in the showroom, spit wherever you like, or litter around. 错误译例八 拍摄地点: 杭州城站火车站 原 文：软度候车室 误 译：SOFT WAITING ROOM 建议改译：First-Class Lounge； 或 Lounge for First-class Ticket Holders The Prerequisites for a C-E Translator 1/ To have a good command of Chinese （汉语水平要高） ---那位研究生英年好学，矻矻三载，终使其论文得以付梓。 参考译文：That graduate student at his life’s full flowering was eager to learn, worked diligently and untiringly for 3 years, and finally he had his thesis published. ---不少人认为“信达雅”是严复的戛戛独造，并奉之为译事圭臬。 Version: Many people hold that “faithulness, expressiveness and elegance” is Yan Fu’s own great original creation and regard it as the standard of translation. ---子在川上曰：“逝者如斯夫！不舍昼夜。” Version: The Master standing by a stream, said, “It passes on just like this, not ceasing day or night!” ---三人行，必有我师焉。择其善者而从之，其不善者而改之。 Version: When I walk along with two others, they may serve me as my teachers. I will select their good qualities and follow the