高三英语写作指导导学案.doc

How to better our composition 2015.【Topic】Writing 【Aim】To write a good essay 【Keys】To improve the writing skillsSTEP 1: Accuracy 先正确 A. 阅卷老师最深恶痛绝的错误 1.There are most of people hold the opinion that do exercises does a great good to our healthy. 2. Under your help, he make a great progress. 3. As we are all known,… 4.I have difficult in English. 5.It has bad efforts/affects on us. 6.It is benifitial to us. 7.I’m appreciated that you help me in English. 8.It’s of vital important. 9. Not only does good to us, but also… 10. Only by this way, you can live a happy life. 11.Helping plays an important role . Because help others is help ourself. 12. To his surprise, he came cross his old friend and spended 3 days together. 13.Write back to me as possible as we can. 14. I want you do it. 15.As the time going by, he still keeps up a good state of mind. 16.But for you help, I can’t finish the work. 17.I leave the first impression on the country. 18.We can ask help for teachers. We should attach importance on it. 19.The more harder you study, the more progress you make. 20.Hardly did he arrived when he recieved a phone call. B. Correct the following passages. (1) My parents live in the country. They keep a dog calling Ah Fu. One day my parents went to work in the fields taking my little sister with Ah Fu along. While they working, my sister walked to the river nearby. Ah Fu followed her there. She was trying to pick a flower while she fall into the river. Ah Fu barked and jumped to the water immediate. When my parents heard Ah Fu barking, they ran to the river. They saw Ah Fu swimming towards the bank carried my little sister. My parents praised Ah Fu warm. It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister. (2) May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement make. The Student Union is going to hold a party in Saturday evening, August 15, to welcome our friends from the United States. The party will be hol