第二周课上写作练习材料范文.docx

考前冲刺（一）审题思路本题探讨的是美国快节奏生活这一现象，属于社会生活类话题。要求简要概括所给材料中的观点，并发表自己的评论。在具体行文方面，考生可以开篇点题，简要概括材料中作者针对快节奏生活的观点。然后提出自己对这一问题的评论并给出充分的论据支撑。最后总结全文，重述论点。Summary写作Para.1-2: A phenomenonThe nation has opted to slow down.Reasons:1. war trauma 2. a deeper understanding of life. 1) walk more slowly; 2) driving better; 3) reconnect with their families and friends. Para. 3: A phenomenonAdding meetingsPara. 4: A conclusion the verdict about this slow life is incorrect.Para. 5-8: offers four measures1. School work should be reduced.2. Service speed should be slowed down.3. Daytime cycle should be stuck to. 4. The threshold for computers should be raised. Summary: A glance of the American society may give you an illusion that the nation has opted to slow down due to a series of reasons such as war trauma or a deeper understanding of life. Yet, the author of the above excerpts points out that the verdict about this slow life is incorrect. Moreover, he offers four measures for fast-free living and they are reducing school work, slowing down service speed, sticking to daytime cycle and raising the threshold for computers. (81 words) （改后）高分范文Slow down and Take a Deep BreathA glance of the American society may give you an illusion that the nation has opted to slow down due to a series of reasons such as war trauma or a deeper understanding of life. Yet, the author of the above excerpts points out that the verdict about this slow life is incorrect. Moreover, he offers four measures for fast-free living. Firstly, school work should be reduced. Secondly, service speed should be slowed down. Thirdly, daytime cycle should be stuck to. And finally, the threshold for computers should be raised. Historian Stephen Kern once pointed out the nature of technology-induced revolution, asserting that its sole purpose is to alter notions of speed, distance, and the pace of social change. These words still mirror the life we are living now—a life that is not meant to slow down at all despite advi