一篇被偷偷借鉴了无数次的PS.doc

一篇被偷偷借鉴了无数次的PS2011年05月02日 15:08:08 我有个新浪博客，是我一个人的小小树洞~ 有时累了上去透口气~发发当时正在听的心爱的歌~ 那些歌曲是我记录自己人生的一种方式吧 也发了自己的一些作品在上面 正是那些作品，现在让我有点小小烦恼~ 经常会有陌生邮件进来询问~ 有些会直接说： 写得真好~ 我拿去借鉴一下~ 我通常会说：那些作品不适合你直接拿去当成自己的PS用，真的会影响到你自己的申请~ 但是我其实是无法阻止他们直接拿去‘借鉴借鉴’的~ 所以，索性搬家到留留学吧 贡献给大家~ 但是非常真诚地提醒一下：真的已经有很多人（发来邮件的就已经有很多了）‘借鉴’过了 所以呢，大家‘借鉴’几个句子或者一些表达还可以 借鉴太多的话，真的会影响到大家的申请 而且，我发布出来的PS，并不是严格意义上的PS 是我给自己和我家小琪写的 而且是没有经过再次加工的初产品，所以才会公布出来 大家会看到篇幅很长，因为还要根据不同需求删减精加工的~ 。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。 再说几句挨砖的话吧 关于留学文书写作，尤其是PS写作 我其实是很矛盾的 也会很有成就感，因为到目前为止，我写的文书的成功率是100% 包括最顶级的学校，如Yale，Cornell、Oxford等等~ 但是，更多的感觉是不安~ 尤其是到了套磁阶段，接触到那些教授们的时候 不安到我甚至无法坚持下去 但是有时候又会民族感情爆发一下 觉得我们国内的学生学业那么好，如果因为英文不过关而申请失败，太可惜了~ 就这样一直矛盾着~一直思想斗争着~ sigh... 。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。 我给我家小琪写的半成品PS Statement of Purpose Abby阿布作品PS001 I fought my first “fight” with my family and won the battle. The monthlong controversy, as to whether I should compromise with the prevailing notion and make a specialty of some hot study programmes such as finance, economics, management, laws, computer engineering and the like, or I should follow the voice deep in my heart to choose what I am really interested in, was over, and I got my way.?? My parents, like any other conscientious parents in China, had long been harboring an aspiration that I could one day become an outstanding elitist, occupying some kind of well-paid genteel position, being respected and even envied. So, when I told them that I intended to apply for the programme of Bachelor of Science in Nutrition, they were more than astounded. I becoming a nutritionist, something no much better than a chef in their eyes because both prepare and serve food to people, was something they had never thought of and never dreamt of. I thought at first they might even regard it as a little bit ignoble and humble, though such words never slipped out of my parents’ lips. I knew a long hard way lying ahead of me if I wanted to win them over. My grandparents, now retired, were both