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内容中的替换－－Para.1 Recently, the issue, a reward expected in doing a good deed has been sharply brought to public attention. Currently, the issue of whether a man should look forward to being rewarded after conducting a good deed is being drastically debated in public. (intensely) Para.2 In some people’s opinion, it is reasonable to expect a reward when doing a good deed. First and foremost, “No pay, no gain”. Now that some efforts have been taken, people should gain rewards. Besides, if holding a expectation of rewarding, people would be encouraged to do good deeds. Some people defended that it deserves to be rewarded after a good deed has been done in that they believe that contemporary society has been increasingly converted “money-worship” community. (因果） Now that it is inevitable for people to spend time and efforts or even consume money in doing good deeds, it is appropriate to acquire/expect rewards. （承接） Besides, rewarding those who have conducted good deeds will inspire/excite/stimulate them to do more (will inspire more people to follow their leads)（递进） Para. 3 In spite of all these claims, most people agree that there is unnecessary to reward after doing a good deed. Most important of all, doing good deed should originate in human’s heart. It’s pleasure to help others. Moreover, Leifeng, doing lots of good deeds without rewards, is regarded as a model. That is to say, praise is beyond a good deed. Finally, it is a responsibility to help others in trouble. In spite of the above-mentioned statements, the majority still consent that it is dispensable to reward people of doing good. Taking Lei Feng as an example, he spent his whole life in aiding and assisting others without expecting returns. To this day, people commemorate him on March 5th. He declined rewards and awards, but harvested regards and respects. Therefore, doing good deeds should be based on one’s beautiful mind, which is a sort of virtue out of one’s own will. Meanwhile, doing good deeds is the