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(4) Classroom ex.  当美丽的夜景灯[the artistically decorated night-scene lights]开始在风中闪烁，当欢快的背景音乐[the joyous and lively context music]合着浪花的节奏开始跳动，当激光喷泉[the laser fountain]在夜幕下勾画出“空中玫瑰” [“air roses”]之时，我们城市的梦想开始在此翩然起飞。 * * Lecture Twelve Sentence Style and Communicative Rhetoric in C-E Translation (1) Translation Theory Practice (2) Course No. 1400142 Lecturer: If you regard style merely an ornament, you are neglecting one of the major opportunities to make your writing in English more effective. 1. Applying sentence styles to C-E translation. The fundamental principle over applying different styles of English sentences is the idea to be conveyed determines choice of the syntactic structures and styles, which should fit the idea, but not vice versa. (1) Compare: 我们将继续对经济结构进行战略性调整，促进产业结构优化，进一步加强农业，改造提高传统产业，发展新兴产业和高技术产业，推进国民经济信息化。 We will continue to make strategic readjustment in the economic structure so as to optimize the industrial structure, which is aimed at strengthening agriculture, transforming and upgrading traditional industries, developing newly emerging and hi-tech industries, and informationizing the national economy. 1) Loose sentence (2) Classroom Ex.  中美两国关系的发展应当对世界上不同历史文化、不同社会制度、不同发展水平的国家相互尊重、和平共处、共同发展起到积极的推动作用。 The development of China-US relations should play a positive role in promoting mutual respect, peaceful co-existence and common development among countries around the world with different histories, cultures, social systems, and levels of development. (3) Compare: 在这个异彩纷呈的世界上，每个国家、每个民族都有自己的历史文化传统，都有自己的长处和优势，应该相互尊重，取长补短，共同进步。 In this variegated world of ours, every country and every nation, with its own historical and cultural traditions, strong points and advantages, should respect others and draw upon others’ strong points to offset one’s own deficiencies, thus achieving common progress. (The key to this style is the coming of the main idea is delayed by left-or mid-branched subordinate structures) 2) Periodic sen