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郑航2012.12英语四级Model Test-03(答案)
2012年12月英语四级(十套模拟题答案)
Model Test-03
Part ⅠWriting
NEET Group Phenomenon
Nowadays, there are a considerable number of young people joining the NEET group. They have already been able to support themselves, but still rely on their parents to make a living.
Why is there such a phenomenon? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. First, those young people are mostly the only child of the family, and they are spoiled by their parents, lacking the spirit of independence. Secondly, the education they have received aims at helping them pass the examinations rather than giving them professional trainings, so they cannot find their advantages in the bitter competition of the job market.
As far as I am concerned, the phenomenon of NEET group is a sign of social resource waste, and has to be removed with joint efforts. If the young people learn to respect their parents and attain more self-supporting skills, if the governments do more in creating new job opportunities and providing job-hunting instructions, the phenomenon of NEET group will one day disappear in China.
点评①
开门见山,点明现在社会上存在啃老族现象。a number of意为很多”,number可用large, considerable 等修饰。be able to do sth.意为“有能力做某事。rely on意为依靠;依赖。make a living意为谋生;生存。
点评②
引出该段的内容,即分析这种现象产生的原因。as follows 如下文所示”, 是写作中引出下文的常用表达。only child意为独生子女。aim at意为力求达”; 以……为目标。help sb. do sth.意为帮助某人做某事。rather than意为而不是,连接两个平行结构。find ones advantage in...意为在……中看到自己的有利条件。
点评③
亮出自己的观点,此处用了 As far as I am concerned意为在我看来。a sign of意为……的迹象。
joint efforts意为共同努力。in表示在……方面”。if... if…排比结构的使用增强了文章的气势。
【增分表达】
英文写作要注意段落内部展开的衔接性和段落之间、语句之间的过渡。
第一段中,首句点明现象,第二句话紧接着对首句进行扩展。第二段中,前两句用why和reasons点明本段的中心是要分析原因。段中使用了first, secondly表示列举的词语对原因进行分层次论述。其他表示增补的表达还有:furthermore, moreover, in addition, last but not least等。第三段用As far as I am concerned / In my opinion将笔锋转到论述自己的观点上来,接着用排比结构阐述了该段主题句中提到的joint efforts.
Part Ⅱ Reading Comprehension (Skimming and Scanning)
【结构分析】本文是一篇有关儿童肥胖症的说明文。第一部分作者首先概述了儿童肥胖症目前在社会上的增长趋势并解释了“肥胖”的概念;第二部分阐述了导致肥胖症的原因和容易引起肥胖的具体因素;第三部分说明了肥胖对儿童健康的不利影响;最后第四部分
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