专业英语四级写作样卷.doc

专业英语四级阅卷 (2009年5月11日起至5月21日，上海外国语大学逸夫图书馆。) PART VI WRITING [45 MINI] SECTION A COMPOSITION [35 MIN] 　　Tourism is a booming business in China. However, some people worry that too many tourists may bring harm to the environment, while others don’t think so. What is your opinion? Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: 　　Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment? 　　You are to write in three parts. 　　In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is. 　　In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your opinion. 　　In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary. 　　Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks. 　　 SECTION B NOTE-WRITING [10 MIN] 　　Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation: 　　Lily, your roommate, is looking for a part-time job in the coming summer vacation. You saw an ad for a private English tutor for a schoolboy. Write her a note, telling her what the job is and strongly recommending it to her. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness I. 评分标准： 1. 作文题目“Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment?” 作文总分15分，其中： 内容占7分：0.5－1－1.5－2－2.5－3－3.5－4－4.5－5－5.5－6－6.5－7 语言占6分：0.5－1－1.5－2－2.5－3－3.5－4－4.5－5－5.5－6 写作规范占2 分：0.5－1－1.5－2（指卷面、标点等） 2. note-writing 总分10，其中： 格式占2分（日期、称呼） 内容占2分（两点：看到有关信息、极力推荐，各一分） 语言占6分 （拼写、语法、语体得体等） II. 存在的问题： 1. 部分离题现象比较严重( 题目：Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment?) 文章主要写tourism的好处，而不谈与环境的关系。 文章主要写保护环境的重要性，而不谈tourism与保护环境的关系。 文章即写发展tourism的好处也写发展tourism的弊端，最后得出发展tourism利大于弊，或者是既要发展tourism又要保护环境。 谈到tourism对环境造成污染，但着重说明如何解决tourism造成的污染，如：政府应该制订法律法规约束人们的行为、提高人们的素质、唤醒人们的环保意识。/或者谈到tourism对环境的破坏，但着重分析为什么，如：人们素质低、地方政府追求眼前利益 2. 思辨能力有待提高 在论证tourism不会对环境造成污染，许多学生是这样论证的： People come to appreciate the beautiful scenery, not to pollute the environment, so they will