作文学案6讲评(议论文).doc

奉贤中学2015届英语写作学案（6） 有人认为高三学习就是做试卷、对答案，对学生各方面能力的培养几乎没有作用。用具体事例谈谈你对此的看法。你的文章必须包括以下内容： 你的观点 具体事例 审题：这是一篇典型的论述性文章。让你用具体事例来谈谈在高三学习过程中锻炼了什么能力。 提纲： 背景+观点： 25% 高三学习的表象 2. 我认为…… However, from my viewpoint, the life in senior three has a lasting and positive influence on me and benefits me a lot. 能力（一）+ 事例 30% First and foremost, the life in senior 3 can cultivate our patience and diligence./ develops our ability to learn independently/ 能力（二）+ 事例 30% Furthermore, the life in senior 3 can cultivate our ability to overcome difficulties./ face pressures and difficulties/ adapt quickly to the changes around them. 总结，升华 15% All in all, all that we do in senior 3 may seem dull, but it really adds to our experience, which can affect our future to a great extent./ In conclusion, senior 3 is a special but helpful environment for us to grow up in. we should redouble our efforts to study as well as to understand the benefits of senior 3 instead of complaining all the time. 可采用的分论点： have the courage to overcome difficulties cultivate team spirit and a strong sense of cooperation by studying in groups the ability to study independently realize the importance of diligence and persistence (perseverance) 好词、好句： shoulder the heavy burden and learn to inspire ourselves 承担负担、学会自我鼓励 conquer any difficulty and hardship 克服艰难困苦 … will become our valuable personal wealth, …成为我们珍贵的个人财富 work one’s head off 苦读 a fierce competition 激烈的竞争 作文中具体举例的片段 第一段： Buried in piles of test papers and reference books, the senior three students are sparing no effort to prepare for the admission to their ideal colleges. No wonder some may complain their life is composed of nothing but endless exercises. However, I still hold that (what we have experienced) does good to us in many aspects. 分论点： The process of solving a tough maths problem is the best example to illustrate how we senior 3 students promote ourselves. Apart from the knowledge and skills we learn from the problem, the process of