英文写作模式英文写作模式.ppt

英文写作模式 模式： 首段：I have receive/read your E-mail. I can understand you. I have the same problem when… Sometimes I meet this problem. I had the same feeling just like you. 二段： Don’t worry / Don’t feel worried I’ll give you some suggestions. I’ll give you some advice on how to deal with it. Here are some suggestions. Try the followings. 三段： First of all,…… What’s more…… Besides, …… Last ,but not least…… 四段：I think that you… I believe that you… I’m sure that you… I hope that you will… 写作文提建议的句型： 1. you dad better do. Sth. 你最好做某事。 2. you had better not do sth. 你最好不要做某事。 3. you should do sth. 你应该做某事 4. you can do sth. 你可以做某事 5. why not do sth.=why don’t you do sth. 你为什么不做某事 6. it’s a good idea to do sth. 做某事是个好主意。 7. Would you like to do sth.? 你愿意做某事吗？ 8. If I were you, I would do sth. 如果我是你我就做…… 9. I advise you to do sth. 我建议你做某事。 10. I’m afraid that you can’t do sth. 我恐怕你不能做某事。 11. What about…? ……怎么样？ 关联词： 1. First……Second……Third……At last…… 2. Firstly……Secondly……Thirdly…… Finally/At last,…… 3. First of all,…what’s more,…besides(另外) , … last, but not least(最后，但是最重要的是),… 书面表达评分标准 说明：先根据文章整体内容和语言表达确定档次，然后在该档次内评出分数。 第一档：（15—13分） 完全符合题目要求，表达思想清楚，内容丰富。使用多种语法结构和丰富的词汇，语言通顺，语意连贯，具有逻辑性。允许个别语言错误。 第二档：（12—9分） 符合题目要求，表达思想基本清楚，内容完整。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯。有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。 成长中每个人都要面对烦恼，并解决问题。假设你叫张华，是美国中学生琳达的朋友。你收到了她的电子邮件，请给她回复，回答她的问题，提出你的建议，并就此事谈谈你的看法。 Dear Zhang Hua, Last Saturday, my friends visited me and asked me to go out to play with them. But my parents didn’t allow me to go out and they even talked to my friends about it for a long time. I felt embarrassed in front of my friends. What’s more, my parents often told me not to play with them because their grades are not good. Do you have the same problem? I need your help. Yours,