2017-2018学年高中英语 Module 4 Fine Arts-Western, Chinese and Pop Arts Task- writing课件 外研版必修2.pptVIP

Task Write a passage about a painting which you like or dislike * Writing methods 1. Think of a painting that you want to describe. It must be a painting that has meaning to you and to other people who see it. The above topics may help you to create ideas. 2. Close your eyes and imagine you are before the painting. Make a list of adjectives to describe the painting. Look over the list. Is there a pattern or theme to the words on your list? 3. Decide on a theme or a sense that you want to create. Is this painting making you feel peaceful? Does it make you feel hopeful? Is it a Chinese painting or Western? Is it traditional or modern? Who is the painter? When was it painted? Keep in mind that you are sharing this painting with the readers. 4. Start writing with phrases and sentences that come to mind. ·Go back to the passage on page 33, if you wish, and use it as model for ideas, vocabulary, and grammar. 5. Write a full draft of your composition. Read it to yourself and see what changes you want to make. Make changes as you go. 6. Check your draft against these questions: Does your description make the reader want to see the painting? Is your description complete and orderly? What feeling or sense do you create? Do you have enough descriptive words to create a sense or feeling? Will your description make the readers have the same feeling with you when they see the painting? Does your conclusion give more information or understanding to the readers? A possible version to the task I was impressed by the rich information on this painting named Plum Blossom. It is my favorite painting. It was painted by a famous Chinese painter and is hung on the wall of the big hall. It shows after an appearance of hardness during winter plums nourish themselves and develop into a beautiful tree in spring. It is a lively painting in the traditional Chinese style. You feel the plums are blossoming so wonderfully as if you could smell their fragrance. They make you feel hope and conti