四级写作训练.ppt

2、结构要求 开头段：描写图表（趋势和数据） 主体段：根据图表信息分析问题，阐述观点和理由 结尾段：总结全文 3. 常用句式 1）As can be seen from the chart,… 2) According to the graph,…. 3) From the chart we can see that the number of ______ varies constantly/greatly in _____. 4) From the figures/statistics above, we can see/conclude/draw a conclusion that… 描述图表 5, The number of (cars) increased suddenly from (June) to (December). 6, There was a (very)?? sudden?increase? in the number of (cars) from…to 比较数据 7, A is more…than B / A is 3 times + bigger than B 8, A is as big as B / A is 3 times + the height/length/width of BA amounts to/reaches/arrives at 20%…A accounts for 50% of the total… 4. 模板 (概括性词语最近出现的总体现象) has become a common part of people’s life. And??(题目要求讨论的具体现象) has always aroused the greatest concern. What impresses us most is (图表描述). The reasons （现象或现象带来的结果，为下文分析产生的原因做铺垫）are varied. Among the various reasons, (原因一) plays an important part. That is to say, (具体说明原因一). What is more, (原因二). For example, (举例说明原因二).When talking about (作者要讨论的现象), (作者的看法). On the one hand, (支持看法的理由一或说明看法的第一个方面). On the other hand, (支持看法的理由二或说明看法的第二个方面). In brief, (总结). 五、书信写作 1、写作步骤 审题 确定基本框架 （写信目的－具体说明－客套话） 正式写作过程－按提纲写作 修改成文 2、格式 称呼－正文－落款 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese. 　　1． 你的基本情况 　　2． 你申请贷款的原因、数额及用途 　　3． 你如何保证专款专用以及你的还款打算 A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan 　　 Mar. 1st 　Dear Sir/Madame, 　　I am a sophomore in Shanghai University, majoring in computer software. In the previous one and a half years I have been a model student and monitor of my class. 　　However, since I registered here, the expenses have become a burden for my average family. You know, my parents are both laid－off workers, and, to make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a majo