英语写作指导综合——我的总结PPT.ppt

3. 主语+系动词+表语 4. 主语+及物动词+间接宾语+直接宾语 5. 主语+及物动词+宾语+宾语补足语 We are students. He became a scientist. That sounds good. He gave Tom a present. He offered me a job. We made him our monitor. The manager thinks the plan practical. He will have his bike repaired. I won’t have you speaking to your mother like that. 并列句 1. 用连词/副词 (and, but , so, for, or , not only…but also, either…or, neither…nor, while, both…and, however, therefore…) 1) Li Ming is 18 years old and he is a student in No.1 Middle School. 2)Hurry up or you’ll be late for school. 3)I must go now, for my sister is waiting for me. 2. 用 “ ; ” 3. 用 “ ; + adv ” 1) We fished all day; we didn’t catch anything. We fished all day; however, we didn’t catch anything. 2) The car was almost new; besides, it was in excellent condition. ,but we ,so all … 2) Lily does well in study; all the teachers think highly of her. 复合句 复合句里包含两个或更多的主谓结构, 其中有一个主谓结构为句子的主体称为主句，另一个／些主谓结构为从句，他（们）只能充当句子的某一（些）成分，,如: 主语, 宾语, 表语, 同位语, 定语, 状语等. 根据他们在句子中的功能分别称为主语从句, 宾语从句, 表语从句, 同位语从句, 定语从句, 状语从句等. 句子的连贯 Faulty: A man is judged not only by what he says but also by his deeds. Faulty: The idea he mentioned at first sounded good. 1. A man is judged not only by what he says but also by what he does. 2. A man is judged not only by his words but also by his deeds. 1. The idea he first mentioned sounded good. 2. The idea he mentioned sounded good at first. 前后的一致、对等、平衡 连贯性的要求是：句子前后之间要有照应，有衔接，思想的表达应该有序，清楚．句子与句子之间的过渡要符合逻辑，不能造成歧义或矛盾． 句子的简洁 １．文字简洁. 如下面这些短语均可用括号中的词代替: from time to time (often), draw a conclusion (conclude), with anger (angrily), It is clear that… (clearly) 试比较下列改写的句子. Do you know the man who is speaking at the meeting? Look out for cars while you are crossing the street? Do you know the man speaking at the meeting? Look out for cars while crossing the street? 2.避免使用同义词重复.(如下面的这些句子, 划线部分重复, 应删掉). 1).He is blind in both eyes. He is blind in the left eye. 2).In my opinion, I think your plan is feasible. 3).The desk is