温州一模分析会公开课.ppt

* Pingyang Middle School Wu Xixi 高三复习写作讲评课 Assessment practice of Writing 目前，大多数高中生选择住校。在寝室里同学间难免会发生一些小磨擦。上周二晚上十点半，张方和李华发生了争吵（张方点灯学习，李华认为影响睡觉……)，你当时在场，帮助解决了他（她）们之间的矛盾。请你用英语写一篇关于这件事情的短文。字数：100-120个词。你的文章应包括下列要点： 1、张方和李华发生争吵； 2、你帮助解决他（她）们的矛盾； 3、你的看法。 Writing Review (一模书面表达回顾) Creating a Harmonious Environment Nowadays, as many students live in the school dormitories, it is hard to avoid quarrels. 目前，大多数高中生选择住校。在寝室里同学间难免会发生一些小磨擦。上周二晚上十点半，张方和李华发生了争吵（张方点灯学习，李华认为影响睡觉……)，你当时在场，帮助解决了他（她）们之间的矛盾。请你用英语写一篇关于这件事情的短文。字数：100-120个词。你的文章应包括下列要点： 1、张方和李华发生争吵； 2、你帮助解决他（她）们的矛盾； 3、你的看法。 体裁 时态 结构 要点 审题 How can we organize this passage? Part1 Part2 Part3 Problem (who when where what) Solution (how) View (what to learn) 要点: 1、张方和李华发生争吵； 2、你帮助解决他（她）们的矛盾； 3、你的看法。 outline …On last Tuesday night, 10:30 pm, my dormitory happened an unhappy thing. ZhangFang turned on lights to study. But LiHua thought it will affect his sleep. Li got angry so they quarreled with each other. When I saw this, I tried to calm them down. I advised them to care about each other. I helped to deal with the problem. In my opinion, studying hard is good, but we shouldn’t influence others. Besides, we’re tired in the daytime, so we should have a good rest at night. Health is more important than study. A student’s version 学生习作 Part1 Part2 Part3 Are all the key points included? On last Tuesday night, 10:30 pm, my dormitory happened an unhappy thing. ZhangFang turned on lights to study. But LiHua thought it will affect his sleep. Li got so angry that they quarreled with each other. Part1 Describe the thing (who when where what) Correct the mistakes At 10:30 last Tuesday night, an unhappy thing happened in my dormitory. ZhangFang turned on lights to study. But LiHua thought it would affect his sleep. Li got so angry that they quarreled with each other. 错误类型：介词、动词、时态 2. 上周,一个寒冷的夜晚,我正准备去睡觉，突然我的卧室变得白天那么亮。 On a cold evening of last week, I was about