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雅思写作 Task 2 评分标准及范文 雅思写作分为Task1和Task2，考官从四项:任务完成情况(Task1)、任务反应情况(Task2)、连贯与衔接、词汇和句式丰富性及语法准确性分别进行评分。 以Task1为例，四项评分分别要求为： 1.在任务完成方面，即审题方面，考察你是否能够在正确审题的基础上完成题目的指令。 2.连贯及衔接方面，即思路方面的要求，文章只有通过一定的衔接手段才能保持上下文的连贯性。衔接手段，经常用的有逻辑、语法和语义三方面的连接词。 3.词汇和句式多样性，即要求用词丰富(Variety)、句子结构注意变换。 （高分关键：词汇包括 词汇的准确 和 多样性（同义词， 避免重复） 句法结构包括 准确性（语法）和 多样性（非谓语动词，复合句） 4.语法准确性方面，指的是文章的语言表达。要获得5—6分的成绩，要求语法错误较少，用词和句子基本准确。 Band 5.0 Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge fro its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university? What knowledge an skills should universities provide has been argued for many yeas. Some people think that the true function of universities provide knowledge for their own purpose, but nowadays, more and more people point out hat universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills according to the workplace. The first reason for university should provide these knowledge and skill is the students’ needs. Obviously, the most of the students go to university purpose of is to get some knowledge and skills which could make them have the ability to get a job. If a university does not provide these knowledge and skills, the students might not get a job and they would be very disappointed. As a result, the university would lose its students. Moreover, providing knowledge and skills need in the work place make a university progress. The new skills and information always are initiated in the workplace, so focusing on the needs of the workplace the university could get sound strategies to do research and make it more mordenization. Lastly, providing these knowledge and skills could benefit our country which usually gives a financial support to universities. Having these knowledge and skills, students are more easy to get a