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情景作文讲评——— Our Spring OutingHow to write a good composition? Essential Elements of Narrative Essays A narrative essay uses all the story elements - a beginning and ending, plot, characters, setting and climax It has clear structure. It usually has a purpose, which is usually stated in the opening sentence. It is written with sensory details and vivid descriptions to involve the reader. Your words need to be vivid and colorful to help the reader feel the same feelings that you felt. ⅡWriting Skills Clear Structure Sample 开头：？ ____________________________________________________________. Last Thursday, we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. We came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing.（准备过程） The next day, we set off early in the morning. While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view. However, when we reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels. Then we started to pick up the litter. Afterwards, we put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.（春游过程） We were tired but happy.（结尾）_________________________________________________. Conclusion: 记叙文结构： 开头段：背景介绍，交代时间、地点、人物事件等(when, where, who，what )； 主体段：讲述活动情节(what),一个或几个段落； 结尾段：故事结局(ending)，归纳、总结，或思想提升． 本文结构： 主体段：情节(what) 1）以时间为线索：Last Friday—The next day---Early in the morning ---While climbing to the top---Then— ---Afterwards… 2) 要点+细节（技巧处理） 2. Vivid Colorful words P1) 1）多方观点： 建议： P2)活动安排：审图角度 1）登山比赛+野餐2）登山+拾垃圾 3）意义：锻炼+增强责任感 P3)高潮处：起伏/转折 1）视觉对比：与P2形成鲜明对比2）心情对比 3）看---行动（构思技巧） P4)语言表达： 1）分类： 2）回收的： 不可回收的3月22日（世界水日）你参加了你班开展的一系列节水宣传活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，以日记的形式记录当天的活动内容。 注意：开头已给出。词数不少于60 提示词：leaflets; 危机 crisis March 22, 2010 Monday Sunny Today is World Water Day. ___________