lect-6-作业评讲+补充练习.pptVIP

Topic sentence 1.Write a topic sentence for a paragraph which describes your hometown ⑴a sentence +⑵topic sentence｛ topic +controlling idea: controlling+ easy to develop ｝+ ⑶hometown. 1.Chengdu, my hometown, is a wonderful paradise, in which there are many places of interest and natural beauties. 2.My hometown is famous for several amazing natural features.? Chengdu, my hometown, is a wonderful paradise, in which there are many places of interest and natural beauties. For instance, Dujiang Dam, which is the greatest irrigation work, has been playing an important role in people’s daily life. Dufu Cottage was built to remember a great writer and poet－Dufu, attracting billions of tourists to come and see every year. Juzhaigou, Emei Mountain, as well as Huanglong are famous natural-beautiful places over the world. Despite these, Chengdu is also famous for its delicious food, on which the climate makes an effect. Someone says that Chengdu is a place which people do not want to leave once they come. And that’s what I really agree with. 2. Develop the following sentence into a complete paragraph. a. At present, there are a large number of people who want to study for a Master’s degree in China. b. There are two reasons why some people like to buy cars with automatic transmission/manual transmission.?  2. Develop the following sentence into a complete paragraph. Topic sentence + a paragraph. a. At present, there are a large number of people who want to study for a Master’s degree in China. b. There are two reasons why some people like to buy cars with automatic transmission/manual transmission.?  Problems: 1.写成3段,把已给的topic sentence当成首段或不要已给主旨句,自己另写一句. 2.段内离题,岔题,重复现象普遍. 3.段内意义衔接(logic)和形式连接词混乱. Sentence errors(句子结构，词性) 1.My hometown is a happiness coast city, which is located in the southern. 2.My hometown is a traditional and silence small town, where has a rice field in autumn it looks like a seas with golden colour. 3.Cars with automatic transmission is