[研究生入学考试]英文写作高分秘笈.ppt

GUCAS English Department Hu Jiangbo 写作的几项基本原则 一、 长短句原则 写一个短小精辟的句子， 可以起到画龙点睛的作用； 或者把短句放在段首或段末，可以揭示主题： 　　As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar. 　 在文章主体部分，要先用一个短句解释主要意思。 二、 主题句原则 　　 一定要写一个主题句，放在文章每一段的开头或者结尾，让读者一目了然。 　　 To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam（主题句）. Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly. 三、 句式多变原则 1）加法 可以在句子之间加and，not only … but also 　　 等短语, besides, furthermore, moreover 2）转折 　　despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, 　　 3）因果 then, therefore, consequently, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that 4）排比 　　Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.??　　 We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. 英文作文必杀技 --句式多样化 句式多样化: 普通句与复杂句结合,长句与短句结合 对于绝大多数考生而言,短期内迅速提高实力是很难的,所以一个秘籍就是平时储备几种非陈述句的句式.根据我们的经验,比较立竿见影的方法有强调句,倒装句和插入语.平时练习的时候可以有意识地运用这些技巧,增加句子的复杂性和多样性.考试中,对于基础一般的学生,此招数可以提高2—6分左右. 凡是普通句都可以进行句式变换,设想一篇文章有20个句子,如果第一句用强调,第二到四句用普通句型,第五句用倒装句,第六到八句用普通句,第九句用插入语,……这样错落有致地把三种加分句型安插到文章中,就会达到抑扬顿挫的效果. 倒装 倒装 1.否定副词位于句首，主谓倒装 比如,对于 “住在大城市好还是小城市好”这样的文章,很多人可能会写: A small city does not have as much excitement as a big city in general. →Seldom / hardly / scarcely does a small town have as much excitement as a big city. 类似的关于程度,频率和比较的句子都可以如法炮制.如: A new factory would contaminate the living space of most of our city’s inhabitants to some degree. 可以改成: Seldom can a factory be established without contaminating the living space of our city’s inhabitants to some degree. 2. + 从句(倒装) 比如关于工厂污染, Only under special circumstances when the factory pollutes, do we need to regulate it. 比如关于喝酒, Only under special circumstances, such as w