中考书面表达作文技巧加实例概要.ppt

 How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. According to it, most people travel. And some people stay at home. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our survey report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays . Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. It makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. 平时应该做什么 A friend is easier lost than found. 得朋友难，失朋友易。 A friend without faults will never be found. 没有十全十美的朋友。 Old friends and old wines are best. 陈酒味醇，老友情深。 A faithful friend is the medicine of life. 真诚的朋友如一剂生活的良药。 A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真交。 A father is a treasure, a brother is a comfort, but a friend is both. 父亲是财富，兄弟是安慰，朋友兼而有之。 A friend is a second self. 朋友是另一个我。 A faithful friend is hard to find. 益友难得。 A true friend is one soul in two bodies. 真正的朋友好似两个身子长著一颗心。 朋友谚语 * 第七讲 一. 目标 1. 知识目标 单词：special, through, breath, notice, madly, competely, enough, several 短语：seem to 句型分析： I can still remember the days we spent together. 2. 能力目标： 书面表达技巧 假设在参加武汉市艺术小人才的比赛中认识了Mary， 她很想和你交朋友。请用英文介绍她的基本情况。 写作要点： 1.来自澳大利亚，留着长直发。 2.性格活泼，擅长快歌。 3.每天锻炼半小时，从不吃垃圾食品。 4.喜欢到各地旅行，参加各种才艺秀。 5.愿意和她成为好友，能激发我的潜能。 提示词汇：Australia 澳大利亚 junk food 垃圾食品 talent show 才艺秀 评分标准 第一档 13-15分 完全符合题目要求，表达思想清楚，内容丰富。使用多种语法结构和丰富的词汇，语言通顺，语意连贯，具有逻辑性。允许有个别语言错误。 评分标准 第二档 9-12分 符合题目要求，表达思想基本清楚，内容基本完整。语法结构和词汇满足文章需要，语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯。有一些语言错误，但不影响整体理解。 评分标准 第三档 5-8分 部分内容符合题目要求，表达思想不清楚，内容不完整。语法结构和词汇错误较多，语言不通顺，影响整体理解。 评分标准 第三档 5-8分 部分内容符合题目要求，表达思想不清楚，内容不完整。语法结构和词汇错误较多，语言不通顺，影响整体理解。 评分标准 第四档 0-4分 与题目有关的内容不多，不能表达出自己的思想。只能简单拼凑影响词语，所写内容难以理解。 评分标准