迎接英语高考高考作文专题.ppt

联考书面表达欣赏： Making Every Day Earth Day As can be seen from the brief dialogue, the earth suffers a lot from man’s behaviour at present. There are many problems. For instance, we human beings are destroying too many trees, which leads to air pollution. Besides, polluted water is sent into rivers directly without being dealt with. Further more, few people are aware of such problems while most of us take them for granted. 联考书面表达欣赏： However, on the Earth Day, some measures are taken to care for the earth. Not only do people spread the idea of protecting the earth, but also something will be done, such as dealing with rubbish, recycling used battery and so on. But that is far from enough. I strongly call on everyone to treat every day as the Earth Day and take care of the earth every day. Only in this way can we hope for a better home to live in. 写作内容要点 ?自我介绍 ?得知的情况 ?表示慰问 ?打算为她做些什么 ?祝她早日康复 范文 Dear Amy, I am Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School in China. I learned from a news report that you are seriously ill and that ACS is trying to help you. Just like many others, I sincerely care about you. Are you getting any better now? Although cancer is hard to cure, it can be defeated. So don’t lose heart. After I talked to my classmates about your case, they all decided to write to you soon. I’ll let more people know this and see what we can do help you out. With love and help from people all over the world, you will surely work wonders. Hope you’ll recover soon. Yours, Li Hua * 高考英语作文专题 书面表达评分标准 一、评分原则 1、 本题总分为30分，按5个档次给分。 2、评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 3、词数少于80或多于120的，从总分中减去2分。 4、评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点，应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯及语言的得体性。 5、拼写与标点是语言准确性的一个方面， 评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以 考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 6、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数 降低一个档次。 二、各档次的给分范围与要求 第五档（很好）25—30分 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 覆盖所有内容要点。 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或高级词汇所致；具有较强的语言运用能力。 有效地使用了句间的连接成份，使全文结构紧凑。 完全达到了预期的写作目的。 第四档（好）（19-24分） 完全完成了试题规定的任务。