介绍事物类书面表达写作指导与训练.doc

介绍事物类书面表达写作指导与训练 写作情景 【写作提示】 描写物体时应侧重物体的形状、规格、大小、颜色和功能。任何一段文字都应有其叙述的中心，对物体的描写也不例外。同样，主题句也应反映出作者对所要描写物体的看法、态度。 【写作内容和要求】 我厂生产G-17数码相机，请你用英语写一篇短文，对该产品作一下简单介绍。要点如下： 1. 产地：上海 2. 生产厂家：飞达照相机厂（生产相机30余年） 3. 性能特点：G-17数码相机是我厂必威体育精装版产品，有很多优点： ① 款式新颖、多样；② 该机机身由轻金属制造，便携带；③ 该相机由电脑控制，易操作，初学摄影的人一学就会。 4. 价格：物美价廉，是同类新产品价格的80%。 二、写作步骤 1. 审题 本文是一篇产品介绍，是一种说明文，亦是一种常见的应用文。首先确定其时态要用一般现在时态；其次语言要简练；最后要突出产品的的特色和优点。 2. 构思 首先开篇点明要介绍的对象(Let me have an introduction to the G-17 digital camera.)，然后按照一定次序来对该产品特点(features)进行说明，包括产地(birthplace)、厂家(factory)、性能(functions)和价格(price)等；最后用推荐性的语句来收尾。 3. 草拟要点 用英语把主要语句简单草拟出来，包括重点单词、短语和句子的主干等。如： ① It is produced in Shanghai, China, by Feida Camera Factory ... ② It attracts people by its modern and different models ... ③ So it is small in size and light in weight ... ④ It costs only 80% of that of the similar ... 4. 组句成篇 用过渡词将上下文的逻辑关系体现出来。使用过渡性词语必须根据上下文需要的原则，力求自然。如： ① first, firstly, first of all, second, secondly, at first, at last, next ... ② thus, therefore, so, as a result, seeing that ... ③ finally, in conclusion, in a word, in general, generally speaking, in short ... 5. 归纳结尾 既然文章属于产品介绍，收尾就要有较强的推荐性，从而引起人们对该产品的兴趣，并注意首尾照应。如： ① Why wait? It’s certainly a wise choice to buy a G-17. ② In conclusion, it’s really a good product with high quality and low price. 三、常用句式和结构 1. Let me have an introduction to ... / Here is an introduction to ... 让我给大家介绍一下……（常用于文章的开头） 2. Above all ..., besides ..., what’s the best ... 首先……，其次……，最好的是…… (产品介绍的次序性) 3. that is to say, namely, for example, such as, to tell you the truth, for this reason ... (表示解释和说明) 4. ① It’s certainly a wise choice to buy ... 购买……确实是明智的选择。 ② I am sure you’ll like it once you’ve tried it. 我确信你一旦用了它，肯定会喜欢的。(用于文章结尾) 四、写作范文 Let me have an introduction to the latest digital camera—G-17. It is produced in Shanghai, China, by Feida Camera Factory, which has been making cameras for about 30 years. The G-17 digital camera has some good features. First of all, it attracts people by its modern and different m