今昔对比谈看法.doc

Unit 2 Writing 话题: 今昔对比：描述变化，表达看法 书面表达（2011-11） 进入初三后，你在日常生活、学习、兴趣爱好以及性格等方面都有了一些变化。请你选择两个方面谈谈你的变化和你对初三生活的看法。 　　　可供参考的词汇：play sports, study by…, more outgoing, busy 审题：文体____________ 时态____________ 人称___________ 内容____________ 结构____________ 文章修改 In the gread 9, my life has changed a lot. First, about free time. In the last year, my life is busy. But I also have a lot free time. Now, I am not only busy but also tired, so now I don’t have free time any more. I only have a little time play sports. Then, all of our subject are difficult. I feel study hard and my grade is very bad. I hope I can deal with that changes. 修改建议： Beginninng: My life has changed a lot in the last few years. This year, I have some changes, because next year I will have to face a big test that may change my life. As time goes by, I have changed a lot and I am happy to tell you the changes I have. Body: As for study, I used to study by myself. But now I often study by working with friends and they often help me learn English. I think it can help me study English better. By Cai Cui In the past, I was a shy girl who didn’t like talking with the other people. But now, I am more outgoing and friendly. By Jingxue Li As for the personality, because of the timidity of the strange environment, I used to be very quiet in the school. But now I have so many friends that I am no longer shy. My outgoing personality makes me more and more popular. By Haoyu Guo First of all, in the past I usually watched TV in the evening. But now I am interested in playing tennis. I play with my friends every evening. Doing sports as much as possible is not only good for my health but also can help me relax. By Rui Chong As for my hobby, I used to be interested in playing games. But now, I prefer studying in my free time instead of playing games. I just find reading books that have great words can give me energy when I am tired. So I always do some reading n